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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 05-18-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Touch (Haiku)

Words are rushing by
a glimpse of love touches me
words my heart can see...

Gentle wind of breath
touching soul from soft red lips
whispered down my neck

Nightly stars do tell
in vibrations No One sees
touching hearts with dreams.

James Parker Haley  May 18, 2000






[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 05-22-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 James Parker Haley - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-18-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wonderful Parker!
I really like these haikus done with
more than one verse.   Well done!

netswan
Janet Marie
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2 posted 05-18-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hey you...
Im tempeted to make a "multiples joke" here
(you started it) lol

BUT this collection is so perfect and so beautifully written I dont wanna miss out on the chance to swoon instead.
*SIGH*
very very nice parker-man.
only you could do sensual Haiku.
later-sweet-gator
jm
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 05-18-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Haleyja, You made a home run out of a tripple
Good work, Enjoyed
Ardonida
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4 posted 05-18-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Hey there
WOW!! I thought this was stunningly done!! WOW!! I cannot write in this style, always a syllibal short or too much!! It is very difficult for me, but YOU, YOu surely are an artist and the words are your colors!!
Kindly
Ardonida
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5 posted 05-18-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

this is very lovely james
sensual, tender.... lovely
oh, and lovely. did i say lovely?


(ummm... check your 'know' last stanza?  )
Marina
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6 posted 05-18-2000 07:17 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

So let me get this straight.....

1. Your heart is seeing things

2. The wind can breathe and wears makeup

3.And stars are vibrating in your dreams

Damn!!!  Your are better persciption drugs then me!

Marina
Corinne
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7 posted 05-18-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Park,

Ethereal and exquisite!

What pandora said, did you mean "No One?" in last Hiaku?

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8 posted 05-18-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Parker~

'Gentle wind of breath
touching soul from soft red lips
whispered down my neck'

Works for me, babe !
BIG TIME !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hippie_teen
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9 posted 05-18-2000 08:09 PM       View Profile for hippie_teen   Email hippie_teen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hippie_teen

A spectacular piece of poetry, and a wonderful format to present it.
Parker
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10 posted 05-18-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

netswan, thank you. I like it this way to, I call this style "Separate But Together" because of the little thread that connects them. There probably is a violation of haiku form here, but sometimes its message before form that wins out.... to me as long as its 5-7-5... its Haiku or Senryu. Thats my story and I'm sticking to it.  

Janet, my friend well I think maybe you should do it in a poem, and whisper it to us.... or should that be scream it to us..  

Seymour, thats high praise coming from you good poet. thank you very much.

Ardonida, well thank you thank you very much,
I say that in a low down Elvis voice. Haven't run across any of your poems yet, welcome to Passions if I missed saying it. I'll check out your work.

pandora, ah! yes you sure did say lovely, thank you. Also thank you on the spell tip.
and did I say thank you...  

Marina, just high on life, and cable, warp speed scotty.

Corinne, thank you sweet friend, Ethereal, yes i'll accept that evaluation. Very sweet of you to say.  

Marge, baby I like working for ya. thank you big time.... I mean BIG TIME.  

hippie_teen, thank you.... and welcome to passions. 60's and 70's back again. eh!

Parker
Corinne
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11 posted 05-19-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Back to the top you go!

Corinne

A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 05-19-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

your poetry is a soft breath of fresh air! Lovely!!! I am a fan of your poetry, I always look to read a new poem from you!
Parker
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Corinne, thanks.

A Romantic Heart, thank you very much. Glad to be looked for, I'll just have to get off my butt and write something new.  

Parker
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14 posted 05-22-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

please do I am waiting for something new! Have you read my muse poem?
Martie
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15 posted 05-22-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Parker--how sweet and tender and a little provocative...yes, I say lovely too!
Parker
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A Romantic Heart, yes pressure, pressure, soon I hope..... whats it worth to ya.  

Martie, thank you, What me provocative.  

Parker
Parker
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17 posted 11-27-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Wink

Just blink testing
nice to wink at you
does this work....

tada

CocoBaci
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18 posted 02-19-2001 05:21 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

A beautiful write Parker...
Enjoyed this very much...
~coco~
Parker
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19 posted 07-28-2001 03:21 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

testing ignore

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 07-28-2001).]

Honeybee
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20 posted 08-04-2001 09:16 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Wow!  

Melissa~
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