... the old black rum
netswan, thank you. I like it this way to, I call this style "Separate But Together" because of the little thread that connects them. There probably is a violation of haiku form here, but sometimes its message before form that wins out.... to me as long as its 5-7-5... its Haiku or Senryu. Thats my story and I'm sticking to it.
Janet, my friend well I think maybe you should do it in a poem, and whisper it to us.... or should that be scream it to us..
Seymour, thats high praise coming from you good poet. thank you very much.
Ardonida, well thank you thank you very much,
I say that in a low down Elvis voice. Haven't run across any of your poems yet, welcome to Passions if I missed saying it. I'll check out your work.
pandora, ah! yes you sure did say lovely, thank you. Also thank you on the spell tip.
and did I say thank you...
Marina, just high on life, and cable, warp speed scotty.
Corinne, thank you sweet friend, Ethereal, yes i'll accept that evaluation. Very sweet of you to say.
Marge, baby I like working for ya. thank you big time.... I mean BIG TIME.
hippie_teen, thank you.... and welcome to passions. 60's and 70's back again. eh!