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Through Space, Through Time

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Through Space, Through Time

It is a pleasant sound to the ear,
to meet in time and get to hear
that sound, the sound of one so dear
reach out and hold me near.

Touch me with your timbre,
whisper soft in my ear
all the enigmas you’ve shared with me
reach out and hold me near.

What would be the likelihood
to have known each other before,
through which very timely portal
to come to this future door?

And which of us reached out first?
Probably it was most likely you,
for you knew there was a passion
in all that I say and do.

And now we are as only one
soulsisters under a rising sun
layers of truth between us to know
and now, how can I ever let you go?


18 May, 2000
©KRJ




 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-18-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

This is a beautiful poem! Yes, it is wonderful to meet someone you seem to know so well already, and it's hard to ever let them go.


 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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2 posted 05-18-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

OY!! Only one who has truly experience this, can write it with such a passion!!
ardonida
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3 posted 05-19-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Karilea~
This is a wonderful deja vu experience.
Of course we know that we've already met in the life before and the friendships go on to the next plane ...
You are a versatile talent ...
prolific with your pen.
Enjoyed your thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 05-19-2000 04:06 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

WOW...sweet little sunshine I read this and I know I have felt this many times.
Fantastic read thankyou  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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Born under the rising sun,
Marked by a celestial sign devine,
A gifted poetess, expressed with fun,
No wonder you call yourself sunshine...

Karilea, this is splendid.

Regards,
Sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
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Thank you ALL for reading...the kindest thought is the knowledge that if you felt this poem was for you alone, then, you were right!  Thanks again...
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