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Making Moments Memories

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-18-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Too many restless memories
too many ways for me to go
too many reasons to stay here
too many seasons
too much snow...

Bask within.
Bask again.
(lovely, private, reverie...)
A picture show,
for me alone---
my satin memory...

Keep me from my searching days.
Save me from my lonely ways.
(Bring me back---
bring back my song...)
Take me back
where I belong.
Laughing, dancing, being free,
making moments memories...


*a little something written in the DAYTIME-lol*
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Keep me from my searching days.
Save me from my lonely ways.
(Bring me back---
bring back my song...)
Take me back
where I belong.
Laughing, dancing, being free,
making moments memories...
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in the sunshine we shall play ...
dance and sing till end of day
then play again we shall, all nite..
by moon beam our poetry we write.

You look divine in the sunshine me sweet!!
love this poem of memories.
me thinks me needs a nap...you too? LOL
later sweet-gator
jm
brian madden
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2 posted 05-18-2000 03:23 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Too many restless memories
too many ways for me to go
too many reasons to stay here

decisions, it can be hard sometimes deciding which direction to take in life, but I think you will be ok in life as long as keep "Laughing, dancing, being free,
making moments memories..."
because that is how life is supposed to be lived, with a smile. loved this one alot.


SpitFire
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3 posted 05-18-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Laughing, dancing, being free,....making moments memories.........fabulous!!!
*Loved this.
Sven
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4 posted 05-18-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Wonderful serenity. . .

Would that we could bottle all of those moments and drink of them whenever we chose. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 05-18-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


This is beautiful, written with such longing, may you find all that you search for...you should write all hours of the day and night I think   Thank you so much for sharing this piece!!


 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
serenity blaze
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6 posted 05-19-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thank you m'friends, once again, and especially butterflies for the lovely ego boost!  Sveetie Sven, and Janet Marie, as always, me grats.  spitfire--thank you--and brian, sweet as ever....thanks...
BrazilianGirl
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7 posted 05-19-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

Beautiful!!! Very well written!!!
I think I need some sleep too... almost 3 months of insomnia ... hehehe
Loved your poem!
tracie66
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8 posted 05-19-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Serenity~
Loved this piece of yours very beautifully written.
You have talent sweet one  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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