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~ Love Locked in Time ~

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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


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Love Locked in Time
~~~


I'm feeling strange
very weak ...
floating in time
no itch ...
no twitch ...
lost memories climb
~
Eternity slips
to tireless eyes
while dreams of past moments
that awake
my surprise
~
All sense
like a dream
all fragrance from mind
your touch I remember
your love locked in time
~
In blackness a bloom
of realities' fright
I'm lost in my doom ...
in my death ...
blackest night
~~~
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serenity blaze
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is beautiful Rex Allen, love this serious side of you---can relate to this mood well---but a word of unsolicited advice?  Don't dwell there too long, luvie, 'tis like quicksand...and the darn stuff sticks...(serenity heads for the showers...)
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 05-18-2000 01:29 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I liked the title of this poem.  Good expression of a love that haunts the mind after the source of that love has gone.
~~nice writing~~
Rex Allen McCoy
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serenity ... thankyou ... I fine ... I write simply from memory and revising old dusty works that simply need a new spark in their fire ... no shortage of dust bunnies here ...
My first wife was a poet and our relationship bombed with nuclear waste in the form of my first scribbles ... over 20 years ago

Danny ... thankyou ...glad you enjoyed ... posting it now was better than writing it then
Rex Allen McCoy
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tracie66
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5 posted 05-19-2000 04:23 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Rex~
I love all aspects of you but I do enjoy this side of you immensely.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Rex Allen McCoy
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Thankyou Tracie
Denise
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7 posted 05-19-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I love your serious stuff as much as your funny stuff!  

Denise
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I have to agree with Denise on this one! I love it! But all of your work just touches me!
Rex Allen McCoy
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Denise ... WhtDove
You're both a treasure

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