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Betrayed by an Angel

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sKiTtLeS
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I used to swear you were an angel,
Showing me Heaven,
Through stained-glass windows.
Ever so pure.
But clouds intercepted the sunlight streaming,
Confusion cleared my vision,
And I saw the bitter truth.
I pulled away your mask,
That heavenly angel face.
And dust was blown from the clouded,
Stained windows.
Revealing hidden secrets,
And unexplainable deceit.
I shudder with the realization,
Of being betrayed,
By an angel.


 sKiTtLeS~
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brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

LOve is blind, I am sorry for your pain and betrayal. I enjoyed reading your poem, but don't give up some angels are genuine and I am sure there is one out there waiting for you.
sKiTtLeS
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2 posted 05-18-2000 05:26 PM       View Profile for sKiTtLeS   Email sKiTtLeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sKiTtLeS

Thanks Brian, I am looking so forward to the day I find my angel. One with golden wings, and absolute truth.   thanks again.

 sKiTtLeS~
Ardonida
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3 posted 05-18-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Ardonida   Email Ardonida   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ardonida

Hi there,
I am new to this, but this poem grabbed me deep down where tissues cannot reach. THe heart. It was so sad, yet such a true situation in life. I once thought I had an angel too. But dont worry, there are plenty of true ones out there, just look at me, I finally found one without a mask!!
Love
Ardonida
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4 posted 05-18-2000 10:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

WHen the wings come off. . .

Excellent poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 05-18-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

When we start seeing and hearing what is really there rather than what we want....it's a blinding sight sometimes.  Thank you for sharing this!

 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
vphantom
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6 posted 05-19-2000 04:20 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

My friend,I too was betrayed by an angel recently and I understand how it feels.  The hurt, the disappointment and the heartbreak. Good luck on finding other angels.  
                           Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and
   the eyes confess the secrets of the
   heart.--
                         St. Jerome
                      
 
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