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epoet
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0 posted 05-18-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for epoet   Email epoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for epoet

Thoughts,
little more than feelings.
Thoughts,
little less than an idea.


Wondering if
what I'm thinking
can be considered
as an obscurity.

Curiosity abounds,
darkness sets in
and clouds my mind.

Making me ponder
the bain of
my existence.

Thoughts,
little more than feeling.
Thoughts,
little less than a dream.

I dream casually,
and randomly
wander thru
my mind.

I have to run
from the fears
in my head.

Trying to hide
how nervous
I am.

Thoughts,
little more than feeling.
Thoughts,
little more than hope.

Hope in a world,
hope in a dream,
hope that someone
believes in me.

Nervous excitement
about love and desire.
Idle chat
seems to make me perspire.

So wound up in
my own little world,
someone please
rescue me...........



 
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ESP
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since 01-25-2000
Posts 2574
Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 05-18-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is good, very "thought"ful!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
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2 posted 05-18-2000 02:38 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I think that we all write from our own world,
though it is important not to forget that we belong to a larger world as well, as you can see you got me thinking, I will shut up now. Great poem.
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
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3 posted 05-18-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

epoet what a cool name!
This is great!   We can all wish to
be rescued, but it is inside ourselves
to rescue ourselves --)

netswan
epoet
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4 posted 05-18-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for epoet   Email epoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for epoet

thank you for the comments.  I appreciate and invite any criticisms you might have as it helps me to see what I might be lacking as a poet.  I'll try to keep up the good work.  I also have some poetry in the corner pub, where I feel right at home.

 P. J. Kotrch
Rosebud1229
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5 posted 05-19-2000 02:24 AM       View Profile for Rosebud1229   Email Rosebud1229   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rosebud1229

Thoughts everyone ponders! I loved your poem . So true it is.

 
tracie66
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Lovely poem, I hope to read more from you
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


epoet
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7 posted 05-19-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for epoet   Email epoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for epoet

thank you for the comments.  I appreciate them very much.  I have more in the pub forum if you are interested.

 P. J. Kotrch
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