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A lifting hand
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A lifting hand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A lifting hand For Liz I've shed this mood that shrouds Clearing the sky of angry clouds. Found a field of daffodil. Listened to the whippoorwill. She did it all with magic verse From a friend and a would be nurse. With grace and steer and words of cheer, That brought my mind from black to clear. Touched again with freedoms hour. Danced within an April shower. Took credence of awes great power. Visited new my Ivory tower. It's good to breath fair air again To walk in marvel in a glen. Tread the shores of millennium Without the shroud of tedium. I thank her for her hand and grace. For boosting me this gentle place. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wowow well written as usual mister sy i likes it alot |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Touched again with freedoms hour. Danced within an April shower. Took credence of awes great power. Visited new my Ivory tower. It's good to breath fair air again To walk in marvel in a glen. Tread the shores of millennium Without the shroud of tedium. I thank her for her hand and grace. For boosting me this gentle place --------------- your heart sings a lovley rhyme this morn SY guy... and this is a perfect tribute and thank you to a special lady. take care, keep smiling jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend~ This is filled with love and thankfulness. She is a wonder. *Hugs* Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie < !signature--> "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." [This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-18-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wayoutwalt, Thank you for the wowow, it was delicious. Janet, Even under a cloud I smile. *L* Marge, Yes she is really something. *L* ESP, Thanks for the love and hugs. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
May I too applaud this lovely tribute? and add that I miss the perfect meter of her rhyme....well done, seymour! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Sy, Your verses sing as we all know You warm my heart and spirit so I thank you for this, my dear friend Now tis I who seeks a glen To breath a little of relief And turn a moment out of grief We all need one another's hand So we can all more firmly stand If I have helped you in this way Then you have certainly made my day Thank you, this is lovely Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thank you so much. *L* Elizabeth, I cannot top you, I can only, Love Sy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Exquisite poetry, Sy and Elizabeth! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To Sy, a wonder you are... To Elizabeth, Sy's shooting star... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh you two! You have found a truly awesome friendship and I am SOOO glad that you have! These friendships are life changers and so essential to what I think is the basis of the human life and heart. Wonderful and a tear in the eye.  K |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, You are a dear. *L* Sunshine, Up above the sky so high I thought I saw you flying bye. *L* Severn, You are the Greatest. *L* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just a gentle  ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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