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A lifting hand

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 05-18-2000 08:05 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

              A lifting hand

For Liz I've shed this mood that shrouds
Clearing the sky of angry clouds.
Found a field of daffodil.
Listened to the whippoorwill.

She did it all with magic verse
From a friend and a would be nurse.
With grace and steer and words of cheer,
That brought my mind from black to clear.

Touched again with freedoms hour.
Danced within an April shower.
Took credence of awes great power.
Visited new my Ivory tower.

It's good to breath fair air again
To walk in marvel in a glen.
Tread the shores of millennium
Without the shroud of tedium.

I thank her for her hand and grace.
For boosting me this gentle place.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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wowow well written as usual mister sy i likes it alot
Janet Marie
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Touched again with freedoms hour.
Danced within an April shower.
Took credence of awes great power.
Visited new my Ivory tower.

It's good to breath fair air again
To walk in marvel in a glen.
Tread the shores of millennium
Without the shroud of tedium.

I thank her for her hand and grace.
For boosting me this gentle place
---------------

your heart sings a lovley rhyme this morn SY guy...
and this is a perfect tribute and thank you to a special lady.
take care, keep smiling
jm
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-18-2000 08:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

My friend~
This is filled with love and thankfulness.
She is a wonder.
*Hugs*
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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ESP
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4 posted 05-18-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is a beautiful poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."


[This message has been edited by ESP (edited 05-18-2000).]
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 05-18-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Wayoutwalt, Thank you for the wowow, it was delicious.

Janet, Even under a cloud I smile. *L*

Marge, Yes she is really something. *L*

ESP, Thanks for the love and hugs.
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6 posted 05-18-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

May I too applaud this lovely tribute?
and add that I miss the perfect meter of her rhyme....well done, seymour!
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 05-18-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Dear Sy,
Your verses sing as we all know
You warm my heart and spirit so  
I thank you for this, my dear friend
Now tis I who seeks a glen
To breath a little of relief
And turn a moment out of grief
We all need one another's hand
So we can all more firmly stand
If I have helped you in this way
Then you have certainly made my day

Thank you, this is lovely
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 05-18-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Serenity, Thank you so much. *L*

Elizabeth, I cannot top you, I can only,
Love Sy
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9 posted 05-19-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Exquisite poetry, Sy and Elizabeth!

Denise
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To Sy, a wonder you are...

To Elizabeth, Sy's shooting star...
Severn
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Oh you two!

You have found a truly awesome friendship and I am SOOO glad that you have! These friendships are life changers and so essential to what I think is the basis of the human life and heart.

Wonderful and a tear in the eye.

K
Seymour Tabin
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Denise, You are a dear. *L*

Sunshine, Up above the sky so high
I thought I saw you flying bye. *L*

Severn, You are the Greatest. *L*
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 01-27-2008 11:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Just a gentle

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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