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~Can I have this Dance~ (for Danny)

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tracie66
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0 posted 05-18-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Can I have this dance dear sir
You can sweep me off my feet

We'll dance until the sun comes up
And the night is near complete

We'll dance until we can't dance no more
Our feet swollen, tired, sore

We'll twirl around that dance floor
Dancing with such ease

Can I have this dance with you tonight
Can I have this dance.....Please

For my friend Danny, I hope this cheers him up  
Love Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 05-18-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


**Tapping my foot in time with the music**
Lovely Miss Tracie!!


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~Eleanor Roosevelt~
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 05-18-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Tracie, what a sweet response to my poem. I love to dance.  It has an intimacy all its own.  
It was a nice surprise to turn on the computer and see your poem.  You are very thoughtful!  ~~means a lot~~
Thank you!
Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 05-18-2000 09:52 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

It sure cheered me up ... I'd cut in but then you'd have sore toes as well
  
Rex


[This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 05-18-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 05-18-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

How could he turn this down?  
WhiteNite
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5 posted 05-18-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Gotta love it!  Beautiful work, I love the way this one flows... and it's the perfect length to read right before work too. =)  --Dave

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Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


ESP
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6 posted 05-18-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is sweet, Tracie! Thanks for cheering our Danny up!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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tracie66
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Victoria, Australia


7 posted 05-19-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Butterflies~
Glad you liked it, it would be my pleasure to take everyone to the dance  
Tracie~

Danny~
Rex was trying to cut in but I was afraid he'd stand on my already sore toes..
I hope you like the dance  

Ruth~
thanks for reading  
Tracie~

Dave~
Glad you read this before rushing off to work   thanks
Tracie~

Lizzie~
anytime  
Tracie~

 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marge Tindal
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8 posted 05-19-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
You cut a cute figure on the dance floor
of Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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9 posted 05-19-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

...LOL thanks Marge.
My husband and I are off to the local fireman's ball next friday night and boy would I love to take all you along we'd have a great time wouldn't we.
Luv Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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