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Rainbow of Peace (Challenge of Lone Wolf and Jeffrey)

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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Is it possible for this to be true
I had heard it but never knew

Yesterday my heart shattered within me
As you walked out of my life to be free

I knew beyond a doubt I would die
No glimmer of hope, with darkness I lie

Never would I heal from this pain
Only in death would happiness remain

The rain began to fall on this dismal day
I knew the sun would never again come my way

My eyes closed....then re-opened in disbelief
What??? A rainbow to mock my grief??

Then a ray of golden sun lit upon me
It opened the eyes of my heart so I could see

This was not the End at all
But a beginning, catching me before I fall

The pain would heal just as the rain will cease
Love and Life will come as had the Rainbow of Peace

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1 posted 05-18-2000 07:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ButterfliesDC~

Just as His promise
has foretold
A rainbow promise rests
over hearts of gold.

*Yours is shining brightly.
~*Marge*~




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2 posted 05-18-2000 07:42 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A most beautiful read Butterflies. See at the end of a rainbow there is always a pot of gold and you surely found yours.
Luv to you
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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Then a ray of golden sun lit upon me
It opened the eyes of my heart so I could see

This was not the End at all
But a beginning, catching me before I fall

The pain would heal just as the rain will cease
Love and Life will come as had the Rainbow of Peace
-----------------------

all we need is a hand up,
all we need is love to call,
all we need is to trust our selves ...
all we need is fate to offer a soft place to fall.


Butterflies and Rainbows ...
my two most favorite things ...*smile*
this is PERFECT as is the poet.
love ya SS,
jm
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Marge* Thank you much for reading   A beautiful promise it is.

Tracie* Mine seems to be hiding in the bushes currently...lol But I will NOT stop the search   Thank you for reading.

J.M. You are the sweetest!! I'm thinking you are a rainbow in disguise  ....goodness knows you are the master of disguise... **AW hugs** S.S. Luv ya!!!


 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
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Beautifully done! I really enjoyed it.
Lone Wolf
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Superb writing, myfriend!!!  You have exceeded the challenge as well.  Love the story and what an end....gives me hope.  Thank you!!!  

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Ohh..."Yesterday my heart shattered within me
As you walked out of my life to be free"

How in the world did you know that's what happened to me yesterday? This is extremely sorrowful, but I enjoyed the glimpse of hope at the end.  Something I definitely need to see right now.  Thank you.  


 *Krista Knutson*

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Great responce to the challenge....far exceeding in my opinion  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Butterflies_dont_cry
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CS* I'm so glad, thank you!
LW* Your story of hope inspired me sweetie!
Krista* I'm so sorry for you pain right now if I could I would fastforward to the rainbow for you! Thank you.
Jeffrey* Thank you to you and LW for this challenge...and thank you for your kind reply.
 
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