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I was wrong

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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 05-18-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl


Not a good one, but I thought I d share anyway


Maybe I was wrong
and we aren't meant to be
Maybe I was wrong
and you arent made for me
Maybe I was wrong
You never trusted me
Maybe I was wrong
You never wanted me
Maybe I was wrong
for letting myself think you loved me
Maybe I was wrong
for letting you desappoint me
I know for sure I was wrong
when I let you take over me
I know I am wrong
for still having you in me
I might be wrong but
I can't erase what you have done to me
And I am not wrong when I say
I wanna fight for you in every way!

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Never wrong to express yourself brazilian girl--I could relate to this.  Thanks for sharing it.
miriam
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2 posted 05-18-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

wait..i don't get it...he's wrong for you but you still wanna fight for him??? it's a great poem...and the only reason im asking to get that part cleared up is because im going through the same thing this very moment.  I love the poem!!

  miriam coronado


SpitFire
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3 posted 05-18-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Great conveyance of emotions to text,...enjoyed the read...Take care. *Peace.
BrazilianGirl
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4 posted 05-19-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

i wrote that when I was really angry at my boyfriend, sometimes things go bad but if you know in your heart its worh fighting then FIGHT coz its better to regret fighting then just regret giving up  
thanks for the replies
 
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