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Is He Going to Kiss Her?
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Is He Going to Kiss Her? |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Is He Going to Kiss Her They conversed with steady flow Their faces were vibrant and aglow He soon walked her to her door His hands looked strong His lips appeared firm and full She knew the golden rules Girls, do not make passes Girls, do not act like they want kisses Girls, must always say no His eyes looked into hers and her heart began beating Is he going to kiss her? She watched as he strolled to his car She sighed and waved good-bye Her heart was in her eyes He ran back with determination and devoured her sweet lips without further hesitation netswan |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Trully wounderous poetry, that explains perfectly one of the most difficult situations that you are ever likely to find yourself in - when both people know what they want and also know what each other wants and yet don't want to make the first move . 'sniff' . I am glad it had a happy ending though . Touched my heart . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sitting on the edge of my seat here waiting for the ending with anticipation...glad he kissed her, I'm a sucker for romance  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Finally came to his senses very nice Rex |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Thanks to: Angelswing - glad you were not disappointed in the ending -) Hoot_owl ---yes, sigh at romance and waiting for the final scene Rex - heheh -- netswan |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Your poem filled me with anticipation. Great job! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
OOOOOH, I loved this poem! (hehehe) "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
There is some confusing information being passed here.... you know. While in my teens and twenties, it was always we don't kiss on the first date....But all you ladies would surely have been very disappointed if it did not happen here in this poem. So what gives? No wonder men have problem understanding women. The rules are confusing and subject to change without notice. Did you ever wonder why insane asylum's are filled mostly with men.... casualties of a first date probably... Great poem, glad he ran back. Parker |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Thanks CS Love Bug and Parker. Oh, but Parker, lots of first dates, I sure didn't want a kiss -- this was a first date where conversation flowed like red wine and the two both had strong feelings of attraction to each other. It is written in her eyes, in the way she lingered at the door and watched him leave. That deserved a first date kiss. --) But, do keep being a gentleman - Parker - in that way you will never get slapped. But, you might miss a few tasty kisses --) netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WELL YOU KNEW I WOULD BE HERE...RIGHT? LOL All this talk fo kissing is making me GIDDY. I saw the title and came puckering LOL this is great swan creative and cute... there just aint enough kissing in the world thats my motto LOL I think I'll get a matching tatoo  poor parker..driven to maddness by questions of the lips... hey parker..what happened to KISS ME YOU FOOL "when in doubt... PUCKER DONT POUT" another motto ok Ill stop now... see what you started Swan LOL |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan, How romantic!!! Loved the end!!! Great work, my friend. I really enjoyed it!! LW |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL JM knew kissing would get you here. Elizabeth has written a beautiful poem on kissing, don't miss it. Lone Wolf, Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed, this poem with such enthusiasm! netswan |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Kind Intimate Saliva Swapping LOL |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely. I always thought, however, that sometimes, just sometimes the kiss isn't necessary.....nice, but I remember it almost being "in the way" at the end....expected...sometimes it's nice to have the second date.... and the third...and let it, just let it happen., but I loved the poem (what's dating anyway??) Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
thanks insect and Irish Rose LOL Rose, dating is a time to meet or hope to meet someone that you can share the future with. A kiss is never necessary on any date, not even an obligation. But sometimes he/she is the one - and you just know it right away. netswan |
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