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Is He Going to Kiss Her?

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netswan
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0 posted 05-18-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Is He Going to Kiss Her

They conversed with steady flow
Their faces were vibrant and aglow
He soon walked her to her door

His hands looked strong
His lips appeared firm and full
She knew the golden rules

Girls, do not make passes
Girls, do not act like they want kisses
Girls, must always say no

His eyes looked into hers
and her heart began beating
Is he going to kiss her?

She watched as he strolled to his car
She sighed and waved good-bye
Her heart was in her eyes

He ran back with determination
and devoured her sweet lips
without further hesitation


netswan

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angelswing
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1 posted 05-18-2000 04:18 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Trully wounderous poetry, that explains perfectly one of the most difficult situations that you are ever likely to find yourself in - when both people know what they want and also know what each other wants and yet don't want to make the first move . 'sniff' . I am glad it had a happy ending though . Touched my heart .
L.of.L. Tom .


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hoot_owl_rn
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Sitting on the edge of my seat here waiting for the ending with anticipation...glad he kissed her, I'm a sucker for romance  
Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 05-18-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Finally came to his senses

very nice
Rex
netswan
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4 posted 05-18-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Thanks to:
Angelswing - glad you were not disappointed
in the ending -)
Hoot_owl ---yes, sigh at romance and waiting
for the final scene

Rex - heheh --

netswan
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5 posted 05-18-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Your poem filled me with anticipation. Great job!
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6 posted 05-18-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

OOOOOH, I loved this poem! (hehehe)  

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There is some confusing information being passed here.... you know. While in my teens and twenties, it was always we don't kiss on the first date....But all you ladies would surely have been very disappointed if it did not happen here in this poem. So what gives?
No wonder men have problem understanding women. The rules are confusing and subject to change without notice. Did you ever wonder why insane asylum's are filled mostly with men.... casualties of a first date probably...  
Great poem, glad he ran back.

Parker
netswan
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8 posted 05-18-2000 05:03 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Thanks CS Love Bug and Parker.
Oh, but Parker, lots of first dates,
I sure didn't want a kiss -- this
was a first date where conversation flowed
like red wine and the two both had strong feelings of attraction to each other.

It is written in her eyes, in the way she
lingered at the door and watched him leave.
That deserved a first date kiss. --)

But, do keep being a gentleman - Parker -
in that way you will never get slapped.
But, you might miss a few tasty kisses --)

netswan

Janet Marie
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9 posted 05-18-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

WELL YOU KNEW I WOULD BE HERE...RIGHT? LOL
All this talk fo kissing is making me GIDDY.
I saw the title and came puckering LOL
this is great swan creative and cute...

there just aint enough kissing in the world thats my motto  LOL
I think I'll get a matching tatoo  

poor parker..driven to maddness by questions of the lips...
hey parker..what happened to KISS ME YOU FOOL  

"when in doubt...
PUCKER DONT POUT"

another motto  
ok Ill stop now...
see what you started Swan LOL
Lone Wolf
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10 posted 05-18-2000 08:36 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

netswan,

How romantic!!!  Loved the end!!!  Great work, my friend. I really enjoyed it!!  

LW
netswan
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11 posted 05-19-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL JM knew kissing would get you here.
Elizabeth has written a beautiful poem
on kissing, don't miss it.

Lone Wolf, Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed,
this poem with such enthusiasm!

netswan
insect
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12 posted 05-21-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Kind
Intimate
Saliva
Swapping

LOL
Irish Rose
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13 posted 05-21-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this is lovely. I always thought, however, that sometimes, just sometimes the kiss isn't necessary.....nice, but I remember it almost being "in the way" at the end....expected...sometimes it's nice to have the second date....
and the third...and let it, just let it happen., but I loved the poem
(what's dating anyway??)  

 Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com

netswan
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14 posted 05-22-2000 05:49 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

thanks insect and Irish Rose
LOL Rose, dating is a time to meet
or hope to meet someone that you can
share the future with.  A kiss is never
necessary on any date, not even an obligation.

But sometimes he/she is the one - and you
just know it right away.

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