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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-05-18 02:06 AM


I have deep thoughts to ponder,
Sitting here, I wonder,
Who am I? To make a difference in the world,

I am a soul, a spirit,
I love unconditionally,
Happily, I give my love away,

Do I embark on a new journey?
A journey that changes my thoughts, my life forever?
Faith is the key, Take the chance to be free,

The more I am free, free to love,
Free to give, free to live,
The more people, Whose hearts I will touch,

I am only one person, but one person can change the world, it takes courage, devotion, boldness,
to express, my heart,to give my love,

I must be different, flow up stream, set apart,
I will bleed all of the love I have out of me,
Every drop to set you free,

a cleanseing, of life, liberty,
For my love is in all, and greater than all,
And I have died for all to be free,

Won't you accept this free gift of my love?
Love me? I can be all things if you let me?
Let go of those burdens and come to me,

I will give you life eternally,
More abundantly,
Sins will be erased,
No more disgrace,

You are searching, Your heart is lonely,
You have tried to fill this emptiness you feel,
Tried to fill it with drugs, beer,sex,internet and
tv,

But fulfillment only last a little while, you see?
You can search your whole life and nothing will
Make you happy completely,

It is a false happiness, like a drug, that wears off in a day or two,You need someone to love you,
Your hurting down deep inside, crying out to be loved, to be held, to be someone special,
You are already special in my eyes,

Everyone has let you down, made you frown,
Heartache, and heartbreak,
I will never leave you or forsake you,
That is my promise,

It is time to let go, cry it out to me,
I am here to listen, I am your friend,
Let the anger go, the hate, the abuse,
Let it go, don't be used,

Now is the time to be,
adopted into this great family,
My family, the bride of Christ,

Where all are made whole, forgiven
Let go of the old self,
Become new through me, Jesus
And start living,

No sin is too great or small,
I see them all, and I forgive all,
For sin is sin,

In the end,
The day you die,
Will you be happy? or sad and cry?
Who will you be? what difference will you make?
Love self? or love selfsacrificaly?

Don't take the chance,
I brought you to this dance, of life,
I am your savior, your friend,

JESUS CHRIST



© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
BrazilianGirl
Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29

1 posted 2000-05-18 02:15 AM


WONDERFUL!  just wonderful!
Im speechless


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-05-18 04:02 PM


"I must be different, flow up stream, be set apart. I will bleed all the Love I have out of me.  Every drop to set you free."
I appreciate his sacrifice...for without this display of Love there would be no love.  James

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-05-18 04:39 PM


RM, this is excellent writing.  Such a beautiful message for all to read.  You are such a talented writer.  This is masterpiece!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-05-19 11:21 PM


Thanks Brazilian girl, James and Danny, An angel inspired me to write...so Gods messenger gets all the credit!!!!

Love you guys! Stay sweet!

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-05-20 11:37 AM


Once more to the top, for the "messenger"

              


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


Lonelypoet
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA
6 posted 2000-05-20 12:21 PM


Romantic Heart,
Great Poem and I think it makes a point to many people in life I hope to see more like this.

lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
7 posted 2000-05-21 11:04 AM


Thoughts to think about indeed, very nice message RM, may bounds of blessings come your way!!
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-05-21 11:48 AM


This is a beautiful live giving message! There is no greater love in all the world! Very uplifting poem, RH!

Denise

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2000-05-22 05:30 PM


One of my favorites.
"It is a false happiness, like a drug, that wears off in a day or two, you need someone to love you.
Your hurting deep down inside, crying out to be loved, to be held, to be someone special, you are already special in my eyes."
These are the loveliest thoughts and truths.
James

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