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Scorpio Moon

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 05-18-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Brushed by feather
(eagles' wing)
this night--an omen in the sky.
A candle--red--a puddle now
(I light the blue one in its stead.)
Scorpio Moon is on the rise,
and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry.

No mystery do I ponder
(even Goddess sleeps tonight)
shadows of this lunacy
twisting words in eagle's flight.

Transformation
holds my gaze
(with no regret for sting of tail)
Penning words by candlelight
I'll be content to know each night...
this dreaded orb is on the wane.
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-18-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Scorpio Moon is on the rise,
and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry.
No mystery do I ponder
(even Goddess sleeps tonight)
shadows of this lunacy
twisting words in eagle's flight.
----------
Penning words by candlelight
I'll be content to know each night...
this dreaded orb is on the wane
-------------

ooh girl...love ya when your
cryptic, mystic and celestial.
this is very cool.
Ill e-you in morn about us singing a tune together...very cool  
say good nite me'twin...
ONE of us has to SLEEP at night LOL
and it aint gonna be you. *smile*
jm
Ethan Halo
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2 posted 05-18-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

Good stuff. you aren't by any chance wiccan are ya? i am, and this made me think it was half poem, half prayer. it's real good; real descriptive. you've got a good talent for imagery. i dig it. and the part:
"and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry."
very mysterious. something hiding in the wings. like i said, i dig it.


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 05-18-2000 03:29 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

And a Merry Meet to you m'friend...Thank you for your kind reply...

(More solitary eclectic, Wiccan-centered, but embrace the truth where ever I find it...)  Feel free to e mail me...I do so love to swap philosophy....
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 05-18-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
I like it when that moon captures everyone's fancy .... good show !
~*Marge*~


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Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 05-18-2000 10:09 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Very nice serenity ... glad to see your writing drifting in a cheerier current

Rex
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 05-18-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I like the title and your writing!
~~very nice~~
Cyndey
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7 posted 05-18-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

beautiful words and expressive thoughts...  
Beautiful poem...
Cyndey
brian madden
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8 posted 05-18-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

magically and beautiful just like a full moon
in a clear night sky.
serenity blaze
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9 posted 05-18-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

My thanks to all once again...you keep me goin' y'do....and yes, 'tis a strange moon this month....Love to you all.
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10 posted 05-18-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Very well written ....love the mystery of it

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Sudhir Iyer
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11 posted 05-19-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

This is a beautiful poem, serenity. I loved every bit of it...

Regards,
sudhir

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
bobbycat
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12 posted 05-19-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

"solitary-eclectic"...I like that.     I do have to agree with Ethan: "and I'm amazed my cheeks are dry" is indeed an amazing line. Your poetry speaks volumes; I, too, have known nights like this. Beautiful poem.  

Christina =^..^=
dhuron
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13 posted 05-19-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Really, this is one of the best I've read in a long while
spiked
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14 posted 05-20-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

serenity
you have broken new ground again
ever expanding the direction you write.
Thankx
 
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