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Nights in the Fall

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BrazilianGirl
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0 posted 05-18-2000 01:40 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl


Calm nights in the fall
When the sky is even bluer
Above my head
Stars shine in the space
And I am here, lost in
Thoughts.

I can not find the sound requested,
I try to erase the images of the past,
But, my head goes insane
In the places I have been

In the secret of the night
The sleep no more exists
That necessary turn off
No longer comes and I can't resist
The pain starts
I am missing you

The days go by
And nothing new ever happens
Everything is routine

I am learning to live by myself
my thoughts help me to conclude
That the human beings are far
from everything and everyone

Modern life determined
a new way to behave
a life closed in a room
without the warmth of a body
That I am in need

Is that what we want?
Was that what we chose?

Maybe, I have my
Heart closed
I won't find peace
The light in my way is off
And my soul can't be found

Everything going on
In my mind
In the tic tac of the clock
I see how hard it is to destroy
A relationship, or if it was
Broken for a thousand reasons
It doesn't matter
It is time for the truth
To clean the dirt and get over it
Reconcile with God and yourself
Because there is no other way


I beg God to light my path
because, I can no longer live
Without you in my way
    

Thank you Guys for reading lots of Love,



 
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Tara Simms
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:55 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

The 3rd stanza really speaks to me.  I'm in my 3rd week of insomnia. Perhaps this is the reason why?  

 It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley


BrazilianGirl
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2 posted 05-18-2000 02:21 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

heheheh insomnia isnt good not at all... I been having it forever! thanks for reading my poem  
serenity blaze
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3 posted 05-18-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

And Thank You, for sharing this...it is nice to know sometimes that we're not as alone as we seem--y'see, you caught my mood EXACTLY.
 
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