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the past gives chase(A haiku)
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the past gives chase(A haiku) |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again 
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i look out the bus window and the past i left fades into focus We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
fades into focus-- I am a new fan of haiku--but ethan, I do so love this...so much here with so few words... My humble applause... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ethan~ Haiku takes a trip Nice token from pen of yours Heah' come da' bus ... run ! *Couldn't help but have a little folly with this one ... Nice Haiku thoughts you've penned. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
since this is mine, i'd just thought i'd test out my new signature.... see if it works ya know? "You are not special. You are not a brilliant and unique snow flake. You are part of the same decaying organic matter as everyone else. We are the |
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