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bout a girl that i once knew...

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Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


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eulogy of herself

tired of wishing, just jumped down the well.
hushed voice in a private hell.
i'm still fighting the same old monster;
i see you still got your hands on her.
         cold words on your lips.
         cold steel on my wrists.
close my eyes so slowly;
             i don't want to see the end.
i feel the cold wind blowing;
             i won't have to feel again.
look to the sky, ready to fly-
         even say a little pray'r.
wings are black, halo's cracked-
         prob'ly never make it there.


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

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very Good, very beautiful
keep up with the good work

 
 
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