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constant turmoil

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Angelwings
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0 posted 05-18-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Angelwings


Colors cascading
Emotions parading
About in my crowded heart.

Thoughts flowing
Never knowing
What is in store for me.

Confusion neverending
Heartache never mending
A seemingly endless journey.

Questions flying
Deeply sighing
No future plans are set.

Helplessness surrounding
My regrets bounding
Any chances of peace.

Smiles lost
Loves cost
a lifetime of memories.

Colors casading
Emotions parading
Around in my crowded heart.


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/,,,,

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Denise
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I'm sure we can all relate to this at one time or another. Very well expressed!

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 05-18-2000).]
serenity blaze
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2 posted 05-18-2000 02:50 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

My head is noisy this night too (this moon won't let me sleep)  nice work for this restless night (or any other, for that matter)  Bravo.
angelswing
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3 posted 05-18-2000 03:44 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Nice job, but what's up with you nicking my name ( not that I mind - your poetry is great and I don't mind if such a great poet follows me ) . Sorry about that hasstle - I just thought I'd ask . WELCOME to passions, I liked your poem very much and enjoyed reading it .
L.of.L. Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
angelswing
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4 posted 05-18-2000 03:48 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

I am very, very, very sorry oh master . It seems that I actualy nicked your name because your date of entry to the site was before mine ... oppps .
Sorry again Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
netswan
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5 posted 05-18-2000 05:35 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Lovely poem -- sad

netswan
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-18-2000 05:52 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

You've expressed your emotions well, with turmoil and confusion penned in such a heartfelt way Angelswings ... lovely poem.

Best wishes,
/Kit
Angelwings
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7 posted 05-18-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

thank you all for your replies   and thank you angelswing i like your name as well   i also go under as Augchic711.  But Angelwings is my pen name. Thank you for reading my poetry all

No dream is impossible.  
brian madden
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8 posted 05-18-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Colors cascading
Emotions parading

Thoughts flowing
Never knowing

Confusion neverending
Heartache never mending

Helplessness surrounding
My regrets bounding
Any chances of peace.

Smiles lost
Loves cost
a lifetime of memories.

fantastic images, I know what it is like to have constant turmoil but all great dramas and poetry are written out of conflict, great poem.  


 
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