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Waiting For Tomorrow
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Waiting For Tomorrow |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So many thoughts running through my head As I lay here tonight stretched out on my bed No idea what the future will hold Time will tell or so I am told Somehow through the course of the night The dark will evolve into the brightest of lights Sunshine everywhere will abound A hope for the future may have been found Right now this is my chance to dream I imagine two lovers kissing by a stream The water flows by cool and fast Both of them hoping this moment will last I smile up at the moon in the sky No one can tell me how or why I know he could make my heart once again sing Just waiting for tomorrow and what it will bring Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this was poignant and beautiful, and gives hope for tomorrows... Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
IR...that was the point exactly!! Thank you!!  Glad you like it, my friend.LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
 I enjoy my dreams more than my reality right now. Deffinitely undersatand this one. Never give up hope. Oh by-the-way, did I mention I enjoyed your peom? =) --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
WhiteNite, Me too!! The dreams are much easier to deal with!! I know there is always hope and anything is possible. Oh, glad you enjoyed it!! LW |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hey there, LW Wonderful poem - rhythmetic and full of hope. Hugs from netswan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, WOW Speechless , simply , speechless All my love, Jeffrey< !signature--> I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
netswan...hey there back to you!! Thanks...Jeffrey's idea!! Jeffrey...I left you speechless?? Wow indeed!!! Glad you liked it, my friend!! LW |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I imagine two lovers kissing by a stream the water flows by cool and fast both of them hoping this moment will last." You reminded me of my girlfriend of many years ago just before she moved away we spent one last day together and we we lying on a hill holding each other and looking into each others eyes and looking into the beautiful blue sky and it was a moment that did last. I still have the picture we took together when I took her to her senior prom. James |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
LW, enjoyed your poem. Hoping the dawn brings what your heart desires! dh A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poemEnjoyed it.!!!!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James....what a wonderful memory you have. Glad to have helped you on the walk down memory lane. Nice to touch someone so. DH....I hope so too. Glad you enjoyed it. vandana...thank you!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Lone Wolf, I'm new here so I'm out and about reading different poems... I'm very glad I stumbled across this poem! It's truely beautiful and so full of imagery, and inspiration! It's nice to hear words that flow from dreams and hope... to give hope to another. keep up the great work~ Cyndey |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
Very lovely, indeed. Christina =^..^= |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cyndey, Thank you for reading!!! I am very glad you enjoyed it. I try to focus on the dreams and hope...not always easy though. Will keep up the work!! Bobbycat, Thank you!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Tomorrow brings happiness Your poem is very touching I wish you well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, Thank you...indeed it shall. LW |
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