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Waiting For Tomorrow

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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 05-17-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

So many thoughts running through my head
As I lay here tonight stretched out on my bed
No idea what the future will hold
Time will tell or so I am told

Somehow through the course of the night
The dark will evolve into the brightest of lights
Sunshine everywhere will abound
A hope for the future may have been found

Right now this is my chance to dream
I imagine two lovers kissing by a stream
The water flows by cool and fast
Both of them hoping this moment will last

I smile up at the moon in the sky
No one can tell me how or why
I know he could make my heart once again sing
Just waiting for tomorrow and what it will bring




 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 05-17-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this was poignant and beautiful, and gives hope for tomorrows...

 Kathleen
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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 05-17-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

IR...that was the point exactly!!  Thank you!!     Glad you like it, my friend.

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
WhiteNite
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3 posted 05-17-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

  I enjoy my dreams more than my reality right now.  Deffinitely undersatand this one.  Never give up hope.

Oh by-the-way, did I mention I enjoyed your peom? =)   --Dave

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Lone Wolf
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4 posted 05-17-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

WhiteNite,

Me too!!  The dreams are much easier to deal with!!  I know there is always hope and anything is possible.

Oh, glad you enjoyed it!!  

LW
netswan
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5 posted 05-17-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hey there, LW
Wonderful poem - rhythmetic and full
of hope.

Hugs from
netswan
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6 posted 05-17-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Lone Wolf,

WOW

Speechless , simply , speechless

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep



[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 05-17-2000).]
Lone Wolf
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7 posted 05-17-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

netswan...hey there back to you!!  Thanks...Jeffrey's idea!!  

Jeffrey...I left you speechless??  Wow indeed!!!     Glad you liked it, my friend!!  

LW
JamesMichael
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8 posted 05-18-2000 04:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I imagine two lovers kissing by a stream
the water flows by cool and fast
both of them hoping this moment will last."
You reminded me of my girlfriend of many years ago just before she moved away we spent one last day together and we we lying on a hill holding each other and looking into each others eyes and looking into the beautiful blue sky and it was a moment that did last.  I still have the picture we took together when I took her to her senior prom.   James
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9 posted 05-18-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

LW, enjoyed your poem.  Hoping the dawn brings what your heart desires!
dh


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10 posted 05-18-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poemEnjoyed it.!!!!!!!
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 05-18-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

James....what a wonderful memory you have.  Glad to have helped you on the walk down memory lane.  Nice to touch someone so.

DH....I hope so too.  Glad you enjoyed it.  

vandana...thank you!!



 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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12 posted 05-19-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Cyndey   Email Cyndey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Cyndey's Home Page   View IP for Cyndey

Lone Wolf,
I'm new here so I'm out and about reading different poems... I'm very glad I stumbled across this poem! It's truely beautiful and so full of imagery, and inspiration! It's nice to hear words that flow from dreams and hope... to give hope to another.
keep up the great work~  
Cyndey
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13 posted 05-19-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Very lovely, indeed.  

Christina =^..^=
Lone Wolf
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14 posted 05-19-2000 10:03 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Cyndey,
Thank you for reading!!!  I am very glad you enjoyed it.  I try to focus on the dreams and hope...not always easy though.  Will keep up the work!!  

Bobbycat,
Thank you!!  

tracie66
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15 posted 05-19-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Tomorrow brings happiness
Your poem is very touching
I wish you well
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Lone Wolf
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16 posted 05-20-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Tracie,
Thank you...indeed it shall.
LW  
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