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Forgive me Love..

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Master
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0 posted 05-17-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Forgive me Love, for my affliction,
When I confused you with my grief,
When I defended my conviction
When I stood by my dull belief
That Love must blossom first in woe,
Then slowly grow into its skin.
How much of love I didnít know!
How much of grief I havenít seen!
And now I recollect those days,
When she was there to sympathize.
The hope was shinning in her gaze,
I loved to watch her with my eyes,
Especially when filled with sadness.
She watched me suffer with affection
And pitied me, then I with gladness,
Enjoyed to be in my dejection.

© Copyright 2000 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-17-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Master, I especially love the last two lines!

Denise
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I enjoyed this much---I know the scenario all too well, and you've expressed it so beautifully...Par Excellence, sir...
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3 posted 05-18-2000 06:34 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Master~
Sir, very well done.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 05-18-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Writtem like a true master.
I enjoyed...thanks
Tracie~


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