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vandana
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0 posted 05-17-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Tell me why,
The stars won't shine today,
Because It's love that had to last,
The time had to say goodbye,
Memories we shared will stay
In my mind,
But your love had to last
without  an end
or without beginning,
Tell me why,
we have to say goodbye,
Memories of yesterday will remain,
In my heart,
Tell me why,
love has to last ,
As love was going fine for us,
Think of dreams
we had to live for,
think of the song  we used to sing,
Think of our love that to leave,
Say you had to go for the reason
you have in your mind,
By the way,
Remember,
I give you my love to you forever,


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-17-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 05-17-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It's very sad when a relationship doesn't work out for whatever the reason. You have expressed the hurt well in this, Vandana.

Denise
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 05-18-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Enjoyed reading this poem.  Love seems to always last in our memories long after the souce of that love is gone.
~~nice writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

brian madden
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3 posted 05-18-2000 03:51 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

memory tends to remain long after the relationship ends, nice sense of conflict of emotions I really liked this poem.    
netswan
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4 posted 05-18-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Great Poem Vandana -- I have no answers
for you
 
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