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The Little Angel

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DestinysCharm
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0 posted 05-17-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for DestinysCharm   Email DestinysCharm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DestinysCharm

The Little Angel

The mornings
here...
the pillows
bare...
the little
angel...
I sent to
care....

Find her a
place...
find her a
home ...
find her soft
glow...
beneath the  
dome...

Take her
sweetly...
take what she
gives...
take her
smile...
while she kindly
lives...

She's very
small...
she's easily
lost...
she's there to
care...
at whatever
cost...

Blest you are
darling...
blest with no
clue...
blest you are
always...
because I love
you...

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brian madden
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1 posted 05-17-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

That was beautiful Destiny, you must love your little angel dearly as you seem to be taking great care of her.
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 05-17-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~a very delicate beauty to this poem~~
nice writing!
Thank you for reponding to my poem.


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

DestinysCharm
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3 posted 05-17-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for DestinysCharm   Email DestinysCharm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DestinysCharm

Brian, Thank you for your kind compliment, this poem is not about a child though, but I can see how you thought that. It's interesting how we can write something one way and someone else see's something totally different.

Danny, Thank you, and your welcome.
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