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Sunshine
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Starlight, star bright, sing
heavens open up and ring
under moonlight swing



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-17-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

What a sweet thing

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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2 posted 05-17-2000 09:15 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

This haiku is a lullaby in itself!  Very well written and whimsical! I love how it rhymes.  Do write some more for us!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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Thank you, Helmut...

Thank you Melissa, I will make every attempt to Haiku when I can!
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Floating gently on a cloud....


4 posted 05-18-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Beautiful!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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countless heavens have opened under a moonlight swing
very lovely
Rex
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Lizzie, Rex, thanks!
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On seeing sunshine,
bats and fireflies do whine,
But, the rest of the world seems fine...

Moonlight, a reflection of the sun shining somewhere else,
Stars, each one is a sun shining from far away,
Heaven is full of such lovely fireflies each sending many a ray...

Regards,
sudhir



 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
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Sudhir, thank you, thank you...
Sudhir Iyer
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U r welcome, welcome, the pleasure is all mine...really enjoy reading your little haikus...

regards,
sudhir
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Sunshine~
Oh, how I love to read your Haiku.
Thanks for sharing, gal friend.
~*Marge*~


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Sunshine, its haiku madness, and your shines very bright under the moon.

parker
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Sudhir, Marge, Parker, thank you all for reading and commenting.  I keep poking along there, Marge, counting, rhyming...he he!
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Ringing laughter
Singing soul
Swinging gay moods

nice one,Sunshine
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Thank you, Kaile...
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