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The worst thing going...

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The Jackal
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0 posted 05-17-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

a penny for the thoughts
and a million for the mind
a man without depression ..
is always hard to find
some would rather melt a plastic face..
not quite so ugly i know..but it will pass
for disgrace
as you appear..in the words..in the fear
can you admit..under god's swallowing eye..
your the worst thing going...
you need to mourn your life away..
already we're bored...of the pretty in you
but we must smile..and shake your hand
our hidden agenda..is the law of the land


 "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings
you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything"

"so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything"

The Jackal
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Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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1 posted 05-17-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

a penny for the thoughts
and a million for the mind
a man without depression ..
is always hard to find
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can you admit..under god's swallowing eye..
your the worst thing going...
you need to mourn your life away..
already we're bored...of the pretty in you
but we must smile..and shake your hand
our hidden agenda..is the law of the land
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damn Jac...this is AWESOME...
way cool poem my friend...very cool
very strong and well expressed thoughts.
i really like this one.
later Jac-gator
jm
JamesMichael
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2 posted 05-17-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"A penny for the thoughts and a million for the mind."  Very nice writing Jackal.  James
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