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~ The Rose of my Eye ~
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~ The Rose of my Eye ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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The Rose of my Eye ~~^~~~^~~~^~~  Strolling through gardens of roses so fair thoughts drifting sweet essence enchanting the air The colors and hues all pleasing to eye each petal a picture make breathing a sigh The trickle of water to pool crystal clear the frolic of birds with nothing to fear A moss covered bridge o'er meandering brook 'neath flowering tree finds you lost in a book My silent approach brings sparkle to eyes your lips gently curl with pleasant surprise There in my hand knelt down at your side a ring made with diamond for the 'Rose of my eye' ~~~ |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
'Whistle' . That has got to be the sweetest thing I've ever read . Aimed at anyone in perticular ? Only that had to have come straight from the heart . Truly beutiful . I enjoyed reading it, it is the best poem I've read for weeks . Keep the poems coming and I'll read them . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so lovely! I like this side of you!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet and lovely, Rex! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
angelswing ... thankyou very much ... you just made my day with your reply  Poet deVine ... thankyou ... it's not often I show this side of me Denise ... thankyou ... your very sweet and lovely too |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Rex---You are so sincerely sweet---this is just beautiful---have missed you much, but had been to blue to smile...thank you, luvie, me smiling now. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Sheer Poetry at its finest. netswan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex I almost thought it was another animal poem, waiting for the twist at the end so once again you got me...LOL. This was something special and you have touched my heart with this my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Enjoyed reading this poem. Really like the layout! You really know how to surprise someone! Terrific poem! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
serenity ... always glad to make you smile netswan ... and the finest thanks to you tracie66 ... glad to have touched your heart humm... we won't go there! Danny ... laughter became an island above the lake of reality ... I still keep in touch from time to time |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Awwww, how sweet! I loved this, a beautiful piece of writing! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
LoveBug ... thankyou |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Shucks ... that's just the sweetest thing I've read tonight. You've taken us on a romantic tour of your heart. Real pleasurable. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marge ... the pleasure was mine |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Rex, you ought to show this side more often! This was perfection! What a picture you've given me to look at. I shall keep this in my mind's eye. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
WhtDove ... thankyou ... lately I've been in the mood to create a little better quality poems than I usually do for just laughs ... maybe I'll come up with something nice ... who knows? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have to admit a preference for Roses, and this did not disappoint!!!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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Lone Ranger Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 92Salvador , Bahia , Brazil |
Wondeful poem, for me... roses are the true vision of love... "Only in the dreams , is that man can truly be free It was always thus and always thus will be" Prof. Keating Dead Poets Society |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Irish Rose ... Lone Ranger Thankyou for your kind replies much appreciated |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woowoo mister mcoy you my friend are a saucey boy |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rex, This is just beautiful, a keeper for sure my friend. Love, Cerenity |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Walt ... you noticed! Cerenity ... thankyou ... glad you liked it and I have kept it for many years ... just revised it a bit |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Dear sir,...this is beautiful. Absolutely lovely in every sense of the word. Thank you for sharing it. *Peace. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
SpitFire ... My sincere thanks to you |
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