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~ silken pleasures ~

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hoot_owl_rn
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~ silken pleasures ~

falling darkness
    and silk light glistens
candles burn
emit a glow

heated kisses
    with silk lips meeting
sighs escape
as passions grow

blue eyes watch him
    silk fingers tracing
gentle curves
on ivory skin

his hands on flesh
    and silk gown rustles
baring thighs
to touch within

two bodies joined
    and silk sheets shimmer
flowing soft
like subtle tears

quiet murmurs
    as now silk whispers
fall upon
her waiting ears


 To love means never to be afraid of the windstorms of life: should you shield the canyons from the windstorms you would never see the true beauty of their carvings. ~Elizabeth Kubler-Ross



[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 05-17-2000).]
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angelswing
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1 posted 05-17-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

A very expresionate poem, with great use of descriptive metaphors . I liked it very much .
L.of.L. Tom .


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wayoutwalt
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2 posted 05-17-2000 10:00 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

hubbita hubbita yowza ying ying egch egch rowr i liked this one lots!
Corazon
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3 posted 05-17-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this flows through the mind like silk...I can almost hear the rustling fabrics...sigh...very happy for you my friend  
hoot_owl_rn
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Corazon...thank you dear, I appreciate that  

angels wing and walt...thanks bunches you two  
Denise
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5 posted 05-17-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Ruth, smooth as silk!

Denise
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 05-17-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Ruth, this is silky eroticism!  The only problem i have with it is that it's
~~~~~~~TO SHORT~~~~~~~
more silky exploration please!
~~very nice indeed~~
Poet deVine
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7 posted 05-17-2000 07:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

How soft and lovely! Visually stimulating because of the imagery you use...I like it very much!  
hoot_owl_rn
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Danny...what more do you want? Thank you for your kind comments  

Sharon and Denise...thank you both so much  
Lone Wolf
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9 posted 05-17-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Hoot Owl,

WOW!!!  So passionate and erotic!!!!  Just lovely...sigh....

LW


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Tara Simms
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10 posted 05-17-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

This was very sensuous!  I could feel the silkiness!
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11 posted 05-17-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

AWESOME!  I really liked the flow of this one!  Thanks for the read  =)  --Dave

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Martie
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12 posted 05-17-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Ruth, I think that silk becomes you!
Balladeer
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13 posted 05-17-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

** pant pant ** It's nice to know that 2,000 silkworms did not live their lives in vain. This is exquisite, Ruth...
TerryW
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14 posted 05-17-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Ruth~
     How Wonderful!!!!!!
This very delicate and gently flowing rhythm paints such a beautiful picture of passion's flames!  I love this one, dear!

Love Ya~


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Very lovely ... I'll have to read this again before I head off to bed tonight ... yuh never know !

Rex
hoot_owl_rn
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Thank you everyone  
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