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Shadow Creeper

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Brandyn Sand
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0 posted 05-17-2000 07:41 AM       View Profile for Brandyn Sand   Email Brandyn Sand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Brandyn Sand's Home Page   View IP for Brandyn Sand

Shadow Creeper on the wall,
Across my flesh your fingers crawl;
Your touch - it takes my breath away.
Just for once I wish you’d stay.

Shadow Creeper take my hand;
Lead me to your promised land -
A place I never chanced to be
Until I felt you loving me.

Shadow Creeper in my dreams,
Our time is ever short it seems,
For outside soon will come the dawn
And in a moment you’ll be gone.

Shadow Creeper in my heart,
You’ve given me a fresh new start,
And I look forward to the day
When you won’t ever fade away.


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Severn
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1 posted 05-17-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lovely work...very evocative Brandyn.

Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 05-17-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I just loved the title
Loved the poem even more
Liz
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3 posted 05-17-2000 07:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Brandyn~
I enjoyed this and the images
on display.  The charisma of the
shadows is compelling.
~*Marge*~


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Wonderful writing...James
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