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BrazilianGirl
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At night, I wanna relax, arrive at the beach
see if the wind is still blowing
And it is going to be good to feel the sand...
I know I do it to forget
I let the wave reach me
and the wind takes it all away
Now you are very far
see, the line of the horizon
drives my mind away
from the dreams we dream together
when we look at the same direction
where are you now...
besides of being inside myself
We acted right
just the time that wronged
Its hard without ya
coz you are in me
all day long
When I see the sea
there is something in me that says
we will be together some day
Since you aint here
what I can do is take care of myself
I wanna be happy at least
and dream of the day it ends
I know, we  are supposed to survive
Look, fishes in the sea...
I know i do it to forget
I let the wave reach me
and the wind takes  everything away
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Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
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1 posted 05-18-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

very sentimental poem. nice expression.
~~good writing~~


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JamesMichael
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The ocean, the fish, the waves, and the wind, and beautiful thoughts for someone you care about.  I enjoyed reading this.  James
 
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