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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-05-17 02:54 AM



Haiku Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

Slowly the moon glows
Cascading light from the sky
Sighs falling from hearts

Dancing stars cluster
Ablaze with glorious light
Twinkle little star

Catching just a glimpse
Across the Milky Way mile
Moonlight is dancing

Feathered wisp of cloud
Curtsies on horizon's glow
Laced across fair face

Reaching for a star
Gathering moonbeams of glow
Romancing the night





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-05-17 03:05 AM


"Guru of Haiku,
sings true song of waxen moon--
glory--all to see."

Love ya mom....and I am working on that cut& paste colorful thing--me so confused...

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-05-17 03:12 AM


Serenity~
You little Haikuist you !
That is PRECIOUS !  Just like you.
If you need help ... e-mail me ...
me help if me can.

But for now this lady is going nighty-nite.
Put your scissors and paste away when you're through playing!
Love you
~*Mom*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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3 posted 2000-05-17 04:08 AM


As I have said before, my dear, you should be making tons of money writing for some fancy greeting card company!  I have NEVER seen anyone who could churn the beauties out like you do, day after day, and lovely, every one!

Also, you are very special, in your sweet way of responding to others.  I especially appreciated your response to my last poem.  You're very dear.

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-05-17 06:08 AM


Sooooo picturesque and flowing ... you wrapped me up in your words and wisked me away ... loved it Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-05-17 06:11 AM


Marge~
You know I love what you write and the way you present it   this is of course no exception.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-05-17 08:05 AM


Rosemary~
You are such a lovely friend.
Thank you ... just gotta find time to
mail in that resume !  

Kit~
Oh, thank you.
That maniacal moon is a muse of
absolute delight.  AND an insomniac !  

Tracie~
Sweetie ... I thank you for always
letting me know ... you're a doll.
~*Marge*~
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com             



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 05-17-2000).]

ESP
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7 posted 2000-05-17 09:12 AM


Moonlight Poetess
Lights up my life with her words;
Marge Tindal's Magic

Wonderful poem, Marge!!

Love and hugs,
Lil Lizzie




 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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8 posted 2000-05-17 12:55 PM


Very beautiful, Marge! Just lovely!

Denise

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9 posted 2000-05-17 02:13 PM


Beautiful Marge.... mind if I add one.


Little fingers point
to its quarter glow at night
Is it made of cheese

Parker

vandana
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10 posted 2000-05-17 07:56 PM


nice poem!!!!!!
mariee66
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11 posted 2000-05-17 09:32 PM


Wow~
Mow this really captures the romance of the night sky...simply beautiful, Marge.
Marie~

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12 posted 2000-05-18 06:49 AM


Lil' Lizzie~
Oh, what a sweet Haiku reply.
I love it !  Well done little mentee !  

Denise~
Kind of knew you'd like it.  

Parker~
I love your addition.
Thank you.

VanDana~
Thanks, hon.

Marie~
Good to see you .. thanks, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Nan
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13 posted 2000-05-18 07:30 AM


Moonlight embraces
The shadows of darkest night
Illuminates all

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-05-18 07:40 AM


Nan~
YEAH ! I love it !

Haiku thoughts seem to flow brilliantly through this forum ... what a pleasure to read them all.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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