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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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0 posted 2000-05-17 02:25 AM




Vivid Souvenirs of Sunrise
~ ~ ~
~ ~ ~
What a wild ride you’ve given;
what a merry chase we’ve known,
through the souvenirs of sunrise
where we ventured all alone.

What a splendid form you showed me
when you sashayed round in grace;
long and lean with sweets between,
and caring soft across your face.

What a tea-party you showed me
during time's remembered lore;
when of Alice I knew nothing,
and you led me through the door.

With such loving arms you took me;
with a tender touch not known,
you and I softly ascended
to a rapture all our own.

What a time - I’ll not forget it,
when we sailed the thunder’s might,
through the magic, through the lightning,
of our youth’s enchanted night!






[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 05-17-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-05-17 03:03 AM


Rosemary In Wonderland~
I love it !  I just love it !
I expected to see that Lucky ...
grinning like the Cheshire Cat !
Wonderful, wonderful.
What a 'tea party' indeed !
You are the bestest, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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Martie
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2 posted 2000-05-17 01:50 PM


Rosemary--I think that you could wright a book of loving... and wild rides ...I loved the reference to Alice in Wonderland...you pulled that off so well and it was music to my ears, the flow the meter...just perfect.  Hugs to you and Dale.  
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3 posted 2000-05-17 05:00 PM


There is no way I could NOT enjoy this wonderful piece...well done, Rosemary!
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