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Souvenirs From Our Sunrise

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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Vivid Souvenirs of Sunrise
~ ~ ~
~ ~ ~
What a wild ride you’ve given;
what a merry chase we’ve known,
through the souvenirs of sunrise
where we ventured all alone.

What a splendid form you showed me
when you sashayed round in grace;
long and lean with sweets between,
and caring soft across your face.

What a tea-party you showed me
during time's remembered lore;
when of Alice I knew nothing,
and you led me through the door.

With such loving arms you took me;
with a tender touch not known,
you and I softly ascended
to a rapture all our own.

What a time - I’ll not forget it,
when we sailed the thunder’s might,
through the magic, through the lightning,
of our youth’s enchanted night!






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1 posted 05-17-2000 03:03 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Rosemary In Wonderland~
I love it !  I just love it !
I expected to see that Lucky ...
grinning like the Cheshire Cat !
Wonderful, wonderful.
What a 'tea party' indeed !
You are the bestest, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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Rosemary--I think that you could wright a book of loving... and wild rides ...I loved the reference to Alice in Wonderland...you pulled that off so well and it was music to my ears, the flow the meter...just perfect.  Hugs to you and Dale.  
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There is no way I could NOT enjoy this wonderful piece...well done, Rosemary!
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