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It's All I Have to Give. . .
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It's All I Have to Give. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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It's all I have to give This heart with which I live A love pure, honest, and true Is all I have to offer you So what shall it be love? Take my heart and soar above? Or are you afraid to know The depth of love I show? Now love, yours is the choice Open your ears, hear my voice This heart with which I live It's all I have to give --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thats plenty cuz yuh got a biggun heart |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
It may be all you've got to give, but WHAT a gift....  She is one extremely lucky lady to have your heart in her hands. This was a beautiful poem.  Christina =^..^= |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Take that heart and Soar as high as one can! What a wonderful gift to offer someone. Not easy to do these days. Though, I think she already owns it! Great poem Sven! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is truly exceptional. Exquisitely written - what a love poem indeed! Very rare. Thank you for sharing it! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is sooooooo YOU ! I love the heart wherein you live. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sugar sweet, and ever so romantic, as ever Sven. Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Beautiful poem, I feel every word and emotion you portrayed. Lucky person to win your heart. Vphantom -The face is the mirror of the mind but the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.- St. Jerome |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I so enjoy your poems Sven ... romance just flows so sweetly out of your pen ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is just lovely Sven...really gentle and oh so tender. Well done I say! K |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ If your heart is all you have to give then my friend you will travel far as your heart is like no other This is beautiful. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is the Sven I know, warm, tender, and with so much love to give Just beautiful Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, I really enjoyed this piece. It had a gentle whisper to it, said on a quiet walk or by the light of a candle. Parker |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Awww Sven,....once again a lovely, lovely piece. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Sven! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Such sincerity, in a most gentle way. Certainly derserving of a sincere answer. A truly lovely piece from the King of romance. Marina |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Ohhh Sven...This is sooo special. Your sweetheart is very lucky. Great poem...very sweet, sensual! Keep writing...and smiling! MagnoliaBlue |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now Sven dear...I have a good feeling about this...so just wait it out... I do love your romantic plea though...very sweet!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, such a sincere and tender missive, this. How could your lady resist? Very, very sweet, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very sweet and romantic, Sven. I know I'd take it in a heartbeat. Excellent writing!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How very romantic this is! Corinne |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hey Sven, I'm stealing this one for my wife...hehe Great writing as always All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
WOW!! Thank you all my friends. . . your kind words really do mean a lot to me. . . I'm amazed by the way that this little poem has spoken to all of you. . . Thank you again. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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