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Cuddlez
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Violin
Your hands play my body
Softly stroking up and down
Pressing and releasing
Completely in tune
Like a master violinist
You make me cry
And tremble with new sounds
Infusing your own emotions
As we become members of the song

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
© Copyright 2000 Cuddlez - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 05-17-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

woowoo packed a punch yuh i like the idea!
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2 posted 05-17-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cuddlez~
This is very well 'orchestrated'.
I enjoyed the tune.
~*Marge*~


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Cuddlez
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3 posted 06-06-2000 05:11 PM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thanks for your replies )

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
amazon_lover
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4 posted 06-06-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Cuddlez love at full flow. Caressing and loving in harmony. You made me feel it.
(((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))
A_L
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Whew!!! You didn't just fiddle around when you wrote this one! Beautiful work, Cuddlez  
Cuddlez
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6 posted 06-07-2000 01:02 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Geesh, I just don't get it. I dont try very hard to write a poem and I do better then if I try ). Thanks for the reply.. I wasn't fiddling, i was playing arpegios )

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
netswan
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Clever --- Cuddlez  Great imagery

~netswan
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 06-07-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This flowed like a wonderful melody itself!  Well done Cuddlez!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Cuddlez
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9 posted 06-08-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

Thank you for your replies everyone... I'm posting a ton of stuff tomorrow, I've just had college finals on the brain...

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
Cuddlez
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I meant I'm posting a ton of replies...

 Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
 
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