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Violin
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Violin Your hands play my body Softly stroking up and down Pressing and releasing Completely in tune Like a master violinist You make me cry And tremble with new sounds Infusing your own emotions As we become members of the song Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
woowoo packed a punch yuh i like the idea! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cuddlez~ This is very well 'orchestrated'. I enjoyed the tune. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thanks for your replies  )Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Cuddlez love at full flow. Caressing and loving in harmony. You made me feel it. (((((((((((hugs))))))))))))) A_L |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Whew!!! You didn't just fiddle around when you wrote this one! Beautiful work, Cuddlez  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Geesh, I just don't get it. I dont try very hard to write a poem and I do better then if I try ). Thanks for the reply.. I wasn't fiddling, i was playing arpegios )Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Clever --- Cuddlez Great imagery ~netswan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This flowed like a wonderful melody itself! Well done Cuddlez! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thank you for your replies everyone... I'm posting a ton of stuff tomorrow, I've just had college finals on the brain... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I meant I'm posting a ton of replies... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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