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lucky
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the west end of

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Lucky~
You amaze me ! ! !

This started off so pretty ..
then WHOMP ... jumped right off
the edge of the cliff !
LOL !  Daredevil !
~*Marge*~


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Lucky, you surely do know how to paint a picture...and the way you weave nature into your story..great! Loved the last line.
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This is written beautifully, honey!  You inspired me.  Immediately, I had to write one about OUR past!  I just couldn't help myself.  Thanks for the inspiration!  I especially loved the first lines - "on the edge of October near the west end of autumn" - lovely.

 
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