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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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the west end of [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ You amaze me ! ! ! This started off so pretty .. then WHOMP ... jumped right off the edge of the cliff ! LOL ! Daredevil !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky, you surely do know how to paint a picture...and the way you weave nature into your story..great! Loved the last line. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is written beautifully, honey! You inspired me. Immediately, I had to write one about OUR past! I just couldn't help myself. Thanks for the inspiration! I especially loved the first lines - "on the edge of October near the west end of autumn" - lovely. |
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