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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2000-05-16 11:34 PM


Future Endeavors

Once just a name
A face unseen
A lonely girl
Behind a screen

She call's me "Pop Tart"
Now she's more than a friend
Is this right?
Don't want this connection to end!

Someday we'll eat cake together
We'll walk holding hands
You found me in Atlantis
Now let's take one more chance

She says "Here's to future endeavors"
I say "Future endeavors indeed"
My kiss tells her
"You're all I'll ever need"


 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-05-16 11:45 PM


Jeffrey,

I love it!!  Challenge exceeded, m'friend!! How romantic...sigh...

Great writing!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Jeffrey Carter
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2 posted 2000-05-17 01:01 AM


Tank yee, Lone Wolf....Still waiting on your poem for my challenge to you though...hehe

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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3 posted 2000-05-17 01:04 AM


Jeffrey~
It's been a pleasure to see you
'growing' in your work.
I like this, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 2000-05-17 01:08 AM


Thank you Marge, I'm just glad I finally found a place that would let me "grow" in my work  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Jeffrey Carter
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5 posted 2000-05-17 06:22 PM


sorry ....gota send it back to the top for those who didn't see it

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-05-17 06:57 PM


I loved your opening verse Jeffery, it left a sweet picture in my mind ... I hope you get to eat cake soon!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2000-05-17 11:20 PM


heres to having your cake and eating it too jeffery great poem of anticpation.
im still working on my challenge poem to you
my muse is still testie LOL
later-jeff-gator (hehe)

Marina
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8 posted 2000-05-17 11:34 PM


Your too cute my little suthern friend.  

Marina

TerryW
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9 posted 2000-05-17 11:34 PM


Jeffrey,
     This is absolutely lovely!  I love the way you captured the emotion of the heart in this one!   Well done, indeed!

Love Ya~
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 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.


[This message has been edited by TerryW (edited 05-17-2000).]

Denise
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10 posted 2000-05-17 11:44 PM


This is so sweet, Jeffrey!  

Denise

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11 posted 2000-05-18 09:41 AM


It's nice to find someone who fulfills your needs, wants and desires  
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