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Future Endeavors

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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 05-16-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Future Endeavors

Once just a name
A face unseen
A lonely girl
Behind a screen

She call's me "Pop Tart"
Now she's more than a friend
Is this right?
Don't want this connection to end!

Someday we'll eat cake together
We'll walk holding hands
You found me in Atlantis
Now let's take one more chance

She says "Here's to future endeavors"
I say "Future endeavors indeed"
My kiss tells her
"You're all I'll ever need"


 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-16-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Jeffrey,

I love it!!  Challenge exceeded, m'friend!! How romantic...sigh...

Great writing!!  

LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
Jeffrey Carter
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Tank yee, Lone Wolf....Still waiting on your poem for my challenge to you though...hehe

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 05-17-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jeffrey~
It's been a pleasure to see you
'growing' in your work.
I like this, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Jeffrey Carter
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4 posted 05-17-2000 01:08 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Thank you Marge, I'm just glad I finally found a place that would let me "grow" in my work  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

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5 posted 05-17-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

sorry ....gota send it back to the top for those who didn't see it

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 05-17-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I loved your opening verse Jeffery, it left a sweet picture in my mind ... I hope you get to eat cake soon!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Janet Marie
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7 posted 05-17-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

heres to having your cake and eating it too jeffery great poem of anticpation.
im still working on my challenge poem to you
my muse is still testie LOL
later-jeff-gator (hehe)
Marina
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8 posted 05-17-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Your too cute my little suthern friend.  

Marina
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9 posted 05-17-2000 11:34 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Jeffrey,
     This is absolutely lovely!  I love the way you captured the emotion of the heart in this one!   Well done, indeed!

Love Ya~


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.


[This message has been edited by TerryW (edited 05-17-2000).]
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10 posted 05-17-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so sweet, Jeffrey!  

Denise
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11 posted 05-18-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

It's nice to find someone who fulfills your needs, wants and desires  
 
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