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Marge Tindal
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Blue Funk Moon
~*Marge Tindal*~

~*~*~*~
*Another view*
*Full Moon waltzing*
*Through moonlit night*
*I wing my way to you*
*with effortless flight*
*Knowing oh so well*
*I am all aglow*
~*~*~*~


For my Balladeer buddy  




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
fool
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1 posted 05-16-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

This is incredibly short,but also incredibly
good,well done,oh,and I love the title.
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2 posted 05-16-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

I think fool said it best: short but sweet! I like the last phrase the most, being "all aglow" sounds rather splendid. Don't ever run out of breathe!

^_^ LadySofia


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3 posted 05-16-2000 11:03 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

cool....
very well done Marge.

chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 05-16-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Fool~
I'm a full moon fanatic,
as you'll soon discover.
Glad you enjoyed.
Now .. go look at the moon !
Is that 'funk' or what?

LadySofia~
Thank you ... it merely takes the
moon to set me 'all aglow'.
And a friend who needs my smile.

ChrisG~
Thank you, my friend.
Glad you enjoyed.
~*Marge*~





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Marge~
      
Yes, that is a wonderful moon!  I can just see you being all aglow with delight!   (Wouldn't have it any other way, love!)


Love Ya~


 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
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6 posted 05-16-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Ooohh,..I love this and the poetic fashion it was posted in   Thanks for sharing.
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TerryW~
Hey there, sweetie.  I'm glad you shared that lovely moon with me !  

SpitFire~
Thank you.  I do like to 'dress'
that moon in fashion !
~*Marge*~


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Can't see the moon tonight...it's cloudy in California...can you believe it...might be a pretty sunrise though...Love the poem, Marge!
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Marge,
Yes.....love the full moon......

Lunar Curiosity

Watching the moonrise
Gaze transfixed upon the lunar shine
Won’t be another like this for a century or more
And there.........a shooting star
Falling nearly straight down on the left of this
Oversized and intensly bright orb
There will never be another moonrise like this one.

SLR


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10 posted 05-17-2000 04:42 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

Marge; this is so neat. Shaped like the moon and beautifully written. WOW!  Ellie

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Sweet and brilliantly presented Marge (I think this is some of the formatting ideas you were showing me yesterday) ... I really enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Martie~
Good morning, sunrise !

Enotneicna~
I LOVE your reply.
Beautiful.  Thank you.

Ellie~
Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
It was a fun piece for a friend !

Kit~
Glad you caught it.
I appreciate your reply.
~*Marge*~


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Full moons are so beautiful, just like this poem! I love the way you put it: "Full moon waltzing through moonlit sky", that is such a perfect description! I love this poem and I love you Marge!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


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Lil' Lizzie, my friend ....
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Sweetie, just remember ... that same moon
shines brightly for us both in the miles between our friendship.
Look ... and you'll see the reflection
of my friendship in the glow !
Love you too, hon.
~*Marge*~


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Well Marge,

This could be one of those times I'm lost for words, could you believe that..! I didn't think so... I stay home this time of month... Let all you crazy moon lovers go nuts. 'Course, I was born with the moon in Cancer but I've only been crazy once..! No 2 times, but that don't count. I got married...

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this is really sweet. danty reflection.
kindly,
redheart angrybraids
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Lovely, Lovely, Lovely, Marge! (As usual!) I really loved this one!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Been a while...but had to sneak in and see what's happening.  Yours are first on my list to read  

Loved this one...I too am a night sky watcher.  It's oh so beautiful.
Marie~
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Totally cool poem, Marge!!!

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This is great, Marge. I especially like the line "For my Balladeer buddy"! You are a funk eliminator extrodinaire!! I love your style  
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21 posted 05-18-2000 02:56 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

My Moon Maiden Mom does it again!

    PERFECTION!!!          
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Never thought of the moon as "funk" - gotta admit.. But I'm always up for something new...  ... Nice one, my friend..
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Lucky~
Now that's a thought - I'd never fathom !
YOU SPEECHLESS ..
'This time of month' sounds rather MIDOL to me !  

RedHeart~
Glad you caught the reflection.
Thank you.

LoveBug~
You're such a sweetie !

Marie~
What a kindness in your words.
Greatly appreciated by this lady.

Corinne~
Totally appreciated.  

My Buddy Balladeer~
Yep .. funk all gone ?
Good ...  
Love ya ....

Serenity~
'Mom' does the 'moon'.

Nan~

There you go ..
never thunk
of the moon
in her 'blue funk'?
Time to broaden
your horizon ...
sometimes she shrinks
in cowardly rising.
Ducking and diving
from a friend in 'blue'
Just another phase
of that magnificient moon !

Love ya' all !
~*Marge*~




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WOW...This moon you have fixed upon me is shining ever so brightly.
Wonderful Marge, so inspiring.
Tracie~


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