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Blue Funk Moon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Blue Funk Moon ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~*~*~ *Another view* *Full Moon waltzing* *Through moonlit night* *I wing my way to you* *with effortless flight* *Knowing oh so well* *I am all aglow* ~*~*~*~  For my Balladeer buddy ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
This is incredibly short,but also incredibly good,well done,oh,and I love the title. |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
I think fool said it best: short but sweet! I like the last phrase the most, being "all aglow" sounds rather splendid. Don't ever run out of breathe! ^_^ LadySofia "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." Amanda Piatt |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
cool.... very well done Marge. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fool~ I'm a full moon fanatic, as you'll soon discover. Glad you enjoyed. Now .. go look at the moon ! Is that 'funk' or what? LadySofia~ Thank you ... it merely takes the moon to set me 'all aglow'. And a friend who needs my smile. ChrisG~ Thank you, my friend. Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~  Yes, that is a wonderful moon! I can just see you being all aglow with delight! (Wouldn't have it any other way, love!) Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ooohh,..I love this and the poetic fashion it was posted in  Thanks for sharing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Hey there, sweetie. I'm glad you shared that lovely moon with me ! SpitFire~ Thank you. I do like to 'dress' that moon in fashion ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Can't see the moon tonight...it's cloudy in California...can you believe it...might be a pretty sunrise though...Love the poem, Marge! |
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Enotneicna Member
since 1999-06-06
Posts 340Oakland, Or, USA |
Marge, Yes.....love the full moon...... Lunar Curiosity Watching the moonrise Gaze transfixed upon the lunar shine Won’t be another like this for a century or more And there.........a shooting star Falling nearly straight down on the left of this Oversized and intensly bright orb There will never be another moonrise like this one. SLR Words are my medicine. Read and live and love and heal! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge; this is so neat. Shaped like the moon and beautifully written. WOW! Ellie 02 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sweet and brilliantly presented Marge (I think this is some of the formatting ideas you were showing me yesterday) ... I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Good morning, sunrise ! Enotneicna~ I LOVE your reply. Beautiful. Thank you. Ellie~ Thank you - glad you enjoyed. It was a fun piece for a friend ! Kit~ Glad you caught it. I appreciate your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Full moons are so beautiful, just like this poem! I love the way you put it: "Full moon waltzing through moonlit sky", that is such a perfect description! I love this poem and I love you Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil' Lizzie, my friend .... I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sweetie, just remember ... that same moon shines brightly for us both in the miles between our friendship. Look ... and you'll see the reflection of my friendship in the glow ! Love you too, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well Marge, This could be one of those times I'm lost for words, could you believe that..! I didn't think so... I stay home this time of month... Let all you crazy moon lovers go nuts. 'Course, I was born with the moon in Cancer but I've only been crazy once..! No 2 times, but that don't count. I got married... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
this is really sweet. danty reflection. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Lovely, Lovely, Lovely, Marge! (As usual!) I really loved this one! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Been a while...but had to sneak in and see what's happening. Yours are first on my list to read Loved this one...I too am a night sky watcher. It's oh so beautiful. Marie~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Totally cool poem, Marge!!! Corinne |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is great, Marge. I especially like the line "For my Balladeer buddy"! You are a funk eliminator extrodinaire!! I love your style |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My Moon Maiden Mom does it again! PERFECTION!!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Never thought of the moon as "funk" - gotta admit.. But I'm always up for something new... ... Nice one, my friend.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Now that's a thought - I'd never fathom ! YOU SPEECHLESS .. 'This time of month' sounds rather MIDOL to me ! RedHeart~ Glad you caught the reflection. Thank you. LoveBug~ You're such a sweetie ! Marie~ What a kindness in your words. Greatly appreciated by this lady. Corinne~ Totally appreciated. My Buddy Balladeer~ Yep .. funk all gone ? Good ... Love ya .... Serenity~ 'Mom' does the 'moon'. Nan~ There you go .. never thunk of the moon in her 'blue funk'? Time to broaden your horizon ... sometimes she shrinks in cowardly rising. Ducking and diving from a friend in 'blue' Just another phase of that magnificient moon ! Love ya' all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...This moon you have fixed upon me is shining ever so brightly. Wonderful Marge, so inspiring. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
My eyes caress the shining moon I linger there for I know soon As darkness shuts the hard won day My love is watching far away. Hi Marge Somtimes I travel and I watch the moon too. Your poem brought this to mind Jon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks gal. If it inspires ... cool ! That moon is really throwing off the 'funk' tonight ! Jon~ Thank you for your lovely reply. As you travel, remember ... we gaze on that same moon. See ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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