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He Spirals Around The Gleam Of Light

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Lost Dreamer
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He Spirals Around The Gleam Of Light

He spirals around the gleam of light
his image a blessing to my sight
I sit beneath my breathless gaze
my mind designing romantic maze.

The floating stars twinkling my flight
letting effervescence flow so bright
halo around full moon spawns haze
my level of thought begins to blaze.

Music transcends deep into night
my inspiration gathers delight
dancing senses to a new phase
sure too enlighten dawdling days.

Energy reaching to dawns height
wind blowing waves of whimsical fright
his spiral image embossed in glaze
forever implanted while dream strays.
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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 05-16-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Wow!  That was a great poem.     It gave me a great insight on dreams.  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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Beautiful Gloria! I wish I could remember my dreams....rarely do...I just wished I dreamed like you, period!!

Denise
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i like the effervescence of this...  

some well chosen words in here... enjoyed, gloria
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Dawn: Thank you very much, I appreciate your reading and responding.  

Denise: Thank you kindly, I appreciate your reading and replying. My imagination made this one up, kind of like day dreaming I guess.  

Doreen: Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate your reading and responding.  

wayoutwalt
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woowoo losty i liked this the flow was well done and it had lotsa prettiness to it !
 
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