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Holly
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0 posted 05-16-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

-Emotions-

a innocent exchange of niceties has left me so perplexed
every waking moment is filled with thoughts of him and i reflect
so filled with worry of how this came to be
i don't know how such feelings consumed me

how did he get under my skin
at exactly what point did i breath him in?

it seems my rational thoughts have no place here
emotions running from love, care, to utter fear
maybe i should just leave these thoughts of him behind
in hopes to end this torement in my own mind

is it possible-could this be he has given to me the sweetest gift to ever be?

This was a poem that was co-wrote by a friend online...a very good friend. He continues to contribute to my life, my being, my spirit, my existence. How lucky I am to be in the mix of such great people.
-Holly




 
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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 05-16-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a wonderful poem.     There are some great questions for insight on a person in there.  Excelent work.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
fool
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2 posted 05-16-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fool

"at exactly what point did i breath him in?"
I love this line,good poem holly.
Holly
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3 posted 05-16-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Thank you so much! I have always viewed my own work as "too emotional", so it's nice to hear others don't think so. Have you ever felt like you took a breath and completely inhaled someone? That's it in a nutshell.

Thank you again,
-Holly
CMGrimm
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yep...I just did.....

very beautiful work Holly.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Holly
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5 posted 05-16-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Chris,
Thank you very much for taking a breath and inhaling. hehe

-Holly
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I will definitely have to agree.....that "breathing him in" line was totally awesome!!  Nice work....and I know exactly what you mean!!!!!    

Christina =^..^=
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Holly,
      your work is indeed not "too emotional". . . in fact, it's quite good. . .

Very insightful. . . taking a breath of someone. . . it can be wonderful. . . especially if you don't exhale. . .

Thanks for this breath of you Holly. . .

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