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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 05-16-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ellie LeJeune

SEASONS

Where does the dream
of springs ending
begin to be summers
awakening
in lush and fertile
unfolding
forth the birth
of all things new
to fill the earth,
mind and soul
with hope of
harvests
dawning fullness
that bares the earth
to the kiss
of frosty dreams
of winters embrace
when opening her arms
to enfold
the endless desires
of spring?


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 05-16-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

ellie, WOW loved this, excellent!
oh and this

that bares the earth
to the kiss
of frosty dreams
of winters embrace

Beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


deleeme
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2 posted 05-16-2000 07:50 PM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Ah, the cycles of changing scenes & desires which make up the Landscape of our lives!
How well you have captured the everchanging-always distinctive seasons in a thoughtful and inquisitive way.  This is a lovely poem, with the imagery serving your purposes well.
Write on sweet poetess!   David
LadySofia
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3 posted 05-16-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

How bountiful the words which sprung from thy lips! Wonderful verse. I hope to read more.

^_^ LadySofia

 "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." ^_^ LadySofia
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4 posted 05-16-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ellie..this is lovely. It really flowed.. nice to see you posting in Open!  
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-16-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

yes indeed, how very nice to have Ellie come play in this sandbox  
perfect poem Ellie, written with your usual grace of captuing nature at its sweetest moments.
take care sweet poet
jm
ellie LeJeune
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6 posted 05-18-2000 05:39 AM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

There truly is a circle of friends here at passions. I love you all for being my support and giving me the encouragement to do my best. Thank you so much! Love, Ellie

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Kit McCallum
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7 posted 05-18-2000 06:08 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I think this is the first I've read of yours Ellie, and I was enchanted with your flowing words ... I will watch for more from you!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Denise
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8 posted 05-19-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Absolutely beautiful, Ellie!  

Denise
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