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Holly
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  ~My DreamWeaver~
my dreamweaver is here everynight
spinning all of my erotic dreams for me
exploring every inch of each other
longing for his touch
my dreamweaver touches me in places no other has dared
doing it with such passion and care
he comes to me everynight bringing me all erotic dreams ever thought
leaving my mind spint and my body wrought
for my dreamweaver knows me like no other
he's my friend and my lover
HLB 2000




 
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1 posted 05-16-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Great poem Holly!  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

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2 posted 05-16-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Holly~
I like this.
I'm a fanatic collector of Dream Catchers
and an easy touch for a 'Dream Weaver'.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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CMGrimm
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very well done Holly...


chris

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bobbycat
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Wow....everyone should have a dreamweaver as this at least once in their lives....excellent poem.  

Christina =^..^=
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5 posted 05-17-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

*cue the song*

"DreamWeaver. . .I believe you can get me through the night. . . "

This is a great poem Holly, short and sweet. . . we should all have such wonderful dreams. . .

--------------------------------------------------------


 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Holly,

  Bravo!  Great poem!  I too have a "dream weaver"  and after reading this, i can't wait to fall asleep....
Holly
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MysticalNights,
Sometimes falling asleep is the only thing that keeps me sane.  

I know of those DreamWeavers..and mine never leaves me disappointed. Gotta love that in a person! LOL

Thank you to all for you words of encouragement. I (as many of you I'm sure) am very critical of my own work, so it's nice to hear good things.

SVEN-great idea about that song...I recall hearing that one when I was a child. Fits nicely.  

-Holly
Kit McCallum
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Wonderful Holly!  Made me want to hop back under the covers and start dreaming myself!  Great verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Danny Holloway
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9 posted 05-17-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

"My dreamweaver knows me like no other"
liked the feel of this poem, so to speak.
~~nice writing~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

 
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