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No Time for Waterfalls

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fool
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0 posted 05-16-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fool

A shadow in my dusk
a planet in your sky
these are just
the places lost and found
on any fine weekend.

We prance and fall down
causes rockslides
king tides
and watch the mortals scuttle for saftey.

I am not a god
cant hold a job
and you've become
the centre of the universe
too busy for waterfalls
and small animals with me.

I pass you a window
you look through
but cant see the stars
I pasted on the glass for you,
cant see the sun my love is
such a shame
i whistle as we walk
to hide hurt
to hide a picnic basket in my hand.

We see the waves
we are the beach
and we stretch on for miles
and your holding my hand again.

I love you really
and pebbles tumble down your cheeks
cause your the centre of the universe
and have no time
for waterfalls
and small animals with me.


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Dawn Eclipse
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1 posted 05-16-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was an excelent piece!  it has a wonderful message in it.  I appreciate your post!  

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

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2 posted 05-16-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Fool~
This is a most, most interesting piece.
You've got some tremendous lines in here.
Enjoyed much.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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