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Holly
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0 posted 05-16-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

-WORDS-

your words float across my screen,
making you real or so it seems
the sweetness, laughs, smiles, & of course
the love you give to me is something I can feel,
even though I can't see

you have given my life depth, my soul a mate,
I still don't understand why, unless it is truely fate
my worries from the day just float away, once I read those beautiful words you have to say

HLB 2000



 
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 05-16-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this one says a ton! it's so accurately portrayed.....so real....so true.


 Kathleen
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netswan
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2 posted 05-16-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Holly, this is sweet.


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Holly
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3 posted 05-17-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Thanks for the sweet words! I appreciate it you guys.  

sincerely,
-Holly
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-17-2000 05:35 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Lovely poem Holly ... I particularly liked your line "you have given my life depth, my soul a mate," ... sigh, nice work!

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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