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The Journey
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The Journey |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA 
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The Journey We all begin a journey From the moment we are born And where this journey takes us 'Til the end remains unknown. Though the path is not always easy And the road may twist and turn We must always face forward And our many lessons learn. The blessings in this journey Are the friends that we will make These are the most precious treasures We should cherish day by day. Those we hold dearest To our hearts down life's road Are the ones we can depend on When we face the rain and cold. Though the journey takes a lifetime If we always give our best And are surrounded by friends who love us Then we have succeeded in our quest. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
AMEN. you summed up life elegantly, great poem. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Thank You, Brian! I am glad that you liked it!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Terry, Exactly the way I feel!!! Friends truly are the treasures in life. Great writing, my friend!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Wonderful sentiment, Terry, and so nicely expressed... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This is so well expressed and true. And you know you have some of those friends here. Good job! I liked this one. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Excellent Poem - and sage advice Terry you are a great poet! netswan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Terry! A life well lived is its own reward! Denise |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A wonderful poem and inspirational too, I think. Well done Terry Marina |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Take my hand and walk with me along life's journeying road. Give to me your burden if it would lighten your load. I am here beside you each step of the way. Take my hand, dear friend we've not far to go today. One day, one step, one friend to join you in your quest. Extend your hand to many who will lead you to your best. When you reach the end of the day no sorrow knows your name, if you have shared of yourself when others have needed the same. *Well, didn't you just inspire my little muse ? Love you ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Very optimistic views on the long road of life, which at times can get you down. Great poem. ^_^ LadySofia "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." Amanda Piatt |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Though the journey takes a lifetime If we always give our best And are surrounded by friends who love us Then we have succeeded in our quest. Well you certainly have succeeded in your quest to write a magnificent poem m'friend. Thank for the All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Everyone~ Thank you all for reading this one! I really enjoyed writing it, because it is something that I have felt inside for a long time! I am glad that you enjoyed it, too!!! Love to All~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Awesome poem, it makes my journey through life a bit more pleasant. Vphantom --The face is the mirror of the mind but the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-- St. Jerome |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I found this so inspiring and positive Terry, wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I completely agree... nicely done! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Terry, You've captured the important things in life in this precious poem Liz |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Stands up and applauds* Wonderful work Terry and such a message |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful sentiment and so much truth in these words...Beautiful poem! |
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