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SpitFire
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~Raindrop~

A black raindrop fell from the night sky
echoing sounds of anger by and by
an inch in front of where I stand
drowning all that I had ever planned.

A red one fell each day that followed
screams of fear I had swallowed
swimming in a pool of thick liquid,...thick thought
trying my best not to give up and get caught.

Itís thickness pulls at my feet
dragging me down to where the liquid meets
my lips,....then my eyes
oh forgive me angry skies.

I have no boat,...no umbrella,...no air
havenít you the sympathy to see me,...to care?
to give me a chance to deal with everything
to release my soul and let my heart sing?

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I know what you mean it was raining all day today I felt quite low   but it is never overcast forever, there will always be a sunny day.  

"I have no boat,...no umbrella,...no air
havenít you the sympathy to see me,...to care?" sometimes life catches you unawares and unprepared but as hard as it is you have the make the best of every situation. Next time it rains run as you did when you are child and think of all your fond memories.

A great poem, I hope you found a silver lining or rainbow on your rainy day.
  
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2 posted 05-16-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, SpitFire!

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~Brian,...thank you for reading,..thank you for your kindly advice.  Your words were a rainbow to my otherwise cloudy day


~Denise,...thank you for taking the time to read and reply,...it means lots. *take care.
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very good spitfire loved the color of the raindrops linked to our emotions.

 
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5 posted 05-17-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Great poem spitfire....keep 'em coming  

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

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SpitFire~
I liked the emotional colors of your raining.
Here's to rainbow's tomorrow.
~*Marge*~




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7 posted 05-24-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Wow! I couldn't let this beautiful poem
drain away.
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