Open Poetry #7 |
A Love For A Lifetime |
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A Love For a Lifetime A love that is endless, is proud and is true, A love that endures all, is confident through; A love that enables my every desire, A love that rekindles each day, as a fire. A love that fulfils all my wishes and then, A love that grows stronger for days without end. A love that is promising, faithful and kind, A love that is passionate, all things combined. A love that is cherished, is fed and enriched, A love that's beyond all my fantasies, which ... Is a love that's forever, unwavering, true; A love for a lifetime, I've found within you. /Kit McCallum |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
You are truly one of the fortunate ones. If only more could feel the way you portray in this poem. You say it all! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ Your thoughts are so pretty in this piece. I really enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely thoughts here Kit...Well Done! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Sonjes: Thank you ... I have some pretty wonderful inspiration. I wrote this a while back for him ... ~Dark Angel: Thank you so much ... ~Marge: I enjoy writing about my love, and thank you for the e-mail Marge! Much appreciation, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A love that enables my every desire, A love that rekindles each day, as a fire. A love that fulfils all my wishes and then, A love that grows stronger for days without end. A love that is promising, faithful and kind, A love that is passionate, all things combined. ---------------- Kit, this is PERFECT and written so sweetly. how wondeful to feel this way... I hope to know this again some day too. enjoy this gift, it is rare. take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kit* **smiles** as I think of this kind of love, also to know that you have this in your life, well written with style and grace. Thank you for sharing this....it's beautiful The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams ~Eleanor Roosevelt~ |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Kit, this is absolutely beautiful! Now that's true love! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kit, very nice, a love we could all hope for. Nice read. Parker |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Janet Marie: I'll ensure I treasure it Janet Marie ... thank you ... ~Butterflies: Thank you for the beautiful comments ... ~Denise: He still makes my heart go a'flutter ... thanks Denise ... ~Parker: I truly believe it waits for everyone (although we all have a few frogs to face before the prince/princess finally makes their appearance) ... thanks Parker. ~Marge: Thanks again for the e-mail and re-formatting. I'll hold on to your ideas, and try them on some upcoming ones ... thanks again Marge! With much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful! Should be printed out..or read at every wedding ceremony.. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Poet deVine: Thank you soooo much, your words mean a lot to me ... Much appreciation, /Kit |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ This is what love should be all about, if only everyone's love life could be like this Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A lifetime and then some Very beautiful Liz |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Tracie: I wish this for all too Tracie ... ~Liz: Thank you for the kind words Liz ... Much appreciation, /Kit |
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