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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2000-05-16 06:23 AM


           A Love For a Lifetime

A love that is endless, is proud and is true,
A love that endures all, is confident through;
A love that enables my every desire,
A love that rekindles each day, as a fire.

A love that fulfils all my wishes and then,
A love that grows stronger for days without end.
A love that is promising, faithful and kind,
A love that is passionate, all things combined.

A love that is cherished, is fed and enriched,
A love that's beyond all my fantasies, which ...
Is a love that's forever, unwavering, true;
A love for a lifetime, I've found within you.  

/Kit McCallum

© Copyright 2000 Kit McCallum - All Rights Reserved
sonjes
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1 posted 2000-05-16 06:50 AM


You are truly one of the fortunate ones. If only more could feel the way you portray in this poem.  You say it all!  

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

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2 posted 2000-05-16 07:12 AM


Kit~
Your thoughts are so pretty in this piece.
I really enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


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Dark Angel
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3 posted 2000-05-16 07:22 AM


Lovely thoughts here Kit...Well Done!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)



Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-05-16 07:36 AM


~Sonjes:  Thank you ... I have some pretty wonderful inspiration. I wrote this a while back for him ...

~Dark Angel:  Thank you so much ...

~Marge:  I enjoy writing about my love, and thank you for the e-mail Marge!

Much appreciation,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-05-16 08:26 AM


A love that enables my every desire,
A love that rekindles each day, as a fire.

A love that fulfils all my wishes and then,
A love that grows stronger for days without end.
A love that is promising, faithful and kind,
A love that is passionate, all things combined.
----------------

Kit, this is PERFECT and written so sweetly.
how wondeful to feel this way...
I hope to know this again some day too.
enjoy this gift, it is rare.
take care, jm



 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave



Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 2000-05-16 08:43 AM


Kit*
**smiles** as I think of this kind of love, also to know that you have this in your life, well written with style and grace.  Thank you for sharing this....it's beautiful  


 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~

Denise
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7 posted 2000-05-16 12:00 PM


Oh, Kit, this is absolutely beautiful! Now that's true love!

Denise

Parker
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8 posted 2000-05-16 03:36 PM


Kit, very nice, a love we could all hope for. Nice read.

Parker

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2000-05-16 07:01 PM


~Janet Marie:  I'll ensure I treasure it Janet Marie ... thank you ...

~Butterflies:  Thank you for the beautiful comments ...

~Denise:  He still makes my heart go a'flutter ... thanks Denise ...

~Parker:  I truly believe it waits for everyone (although we all have a few frogs to face before the prince/princess finally makes their appearance) ... thanks Parker.

~Marge:  Thanks again for the e-mail and re-formatting.  I'll hold on to your ideas, and try them on some upcoming ones ... thanks again Marge!

With much appreciation to all,
/Kit

Poet deVine
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10 posted 2000-05-16 09:27 PM


This is wonderful! Should be printed out..or read at every wedding ceremony..  
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-05-17 06:56 AM


~Poet deVine:  Thank you soooo much, your words mean a lot to me ...

Much appreciation,
/Kit

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-05-17 07:10 AM


Kit~
This is what love should be all about, if only everyone's love life could be like this  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 2000-05-17 07:52 AM


A lifetime and then some
Very beautiful
Liz

Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-05-17 06:44 PM


~Tracie:  I wish this for all too Tracie ...

~Liz:  Thank you for the kind words Liz ...

Much appreciation,
/Kit

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