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A Love For A Lifetime

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Kit McCallum
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           A Love For a Lifetime

A love that is endless, is proud and is true,
A love that endures all, is confident through;
A love that enables my every desire,
A love that rekindles each day, as a fire.

A love that fulfils all my wishes and then,
A love that grows stronger for days without end.
A love that is promising, faithful and kind,
A love that is passionate, all things combined.

A love that is cherished, is fed and enriched,
A love that's beyond all my fantasies, which ...
Is a love that's forever, unwavering, true;
A love for a lifetime, I've found within you.  

/Kit McCallum
© Copyright 2000 Kit McCallum - All Rights Reserved
sonjes
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You are truly one of the fortunate ones. If only more could feel the way you portray in this poem.  You say it all!  

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma
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2 posted 05-16-2000 07:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kit~
Your thoughts are so pretty in this piece.
I really enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 05-16-2000 07:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Lovely thoughts here Kit...Well Done!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-16-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

~Sonjes:  Thank you ... I have some pretty wonderful inspiration. I wrote this a while back for him ...

~Dark Angel:  Thank you so much ...

~Marge:  I enjoy writing about my love, and thank you for the e-mail Marge!

Much appreciation,
/Kit
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A love that enables my every desire,
A love that rekindles each day, as a fire.

A love that fulfils all my wishes and then,
A love that grows stronger for days without end.
A love that is promising, faithful and kind,
A love that is passionate, all things combined.
----------------

Kit, this is PERFECT and written so sweetly.
how wondeful to feel this way...
I hope to know this again some day too.
enjoy this gift, it is rare.
take care, jm



 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 05-16-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Kit*
**smiles** as I think of this kind of love, also to know that you have this in your life, well written with style and grace.  Thank you for sharing this....it's beautiful  


 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
Denise
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Oh, Kit, this is absolutely beautiful! Now that's true love!

Denise
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Kit, very nice, a love we could all hope for. Nice read.

Parker
Kit McCallum
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~Janet Marie:  I'll ensure I treasure it Janet Marie ... thank you ...

~Butterflies:  Thank you for the beautiful comments ...

~Denise:  He still makes my heart go a'flutter ... thanks Denise ...

~Parker:  I truly believe it waits for everyone (although we all have a few frogs to face before the prince/princess finally makes their appearance) ... thanks Parker.

~Marge:  Thanks again for the e-mail and re-formatting.  I'll hold on to your ideas, and try them on some upcoming ones ... thanks again Marge!

With much appreciation to all,
/Kit
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10 posted 05-16-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is wonderful! Should be printed out..or read at every wedding ceremony..  
Kit McCallum
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~Poet deVine:  Thank you soooo much, your words mean a lot to me ...

Much appreciation,
/Kit
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Kit~
This is what love should be all about, if only everyone's love life could be like this  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 05-17-2000 07:52 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A lifetime and then some
Very beautiful
Liz
Kit McCallum
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~Tracie:  I wish this for all too Tracie ...

~Liz:  Thank you for the kind words Liz ...

Much appreciation,
/Kit
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