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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
Twinkle, twinkle Star in the sky How many more wishes Will you deny? I wished upon your twinkle For many long years And yet you grant me nothing Except heart broken tears. You say you forgot Well let me remind you It all started one night At about one or two I wished to find my soulmate One for me alone One tha's kind and gentle Not with a heart of stone. I want her to be loving And with an angel's grace I want her to show compassion With every touch and embrace What I ask is fairly simple And I shall wish for nothing more Just for her to be beside me So I can love and adore Twinkling star in the sky A loving soulmate is all I miss So now I send you My dearest wish: Star light...Star bright... Vphantom --The face is the mirror of the mind and the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-- St. Jerome |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I hope the stars are listening for you, and that your wishes come true VPhantom ... lovely poetic request! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ah...soul mates...do they exist? Are they under our noses and we are so busy searching that we don't see them? I really felt your poem, in every word and thought. Keep your soul alive in your journeys. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VPhantom~ I've been a 'star wisher' for many years ... I like to think that the wishes find there way to another's heart. Of course I've had a few that got lost in the time-warp ... but I just wish again. I enjoyed your thoughts. Hope your 'star' has a brand new twinkle. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is wonderful vphantom  well done!Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i can't express how much i liked this poem. I was a star wisher too and mines never came true so i gave up. YOu'll have a turn in life soon..and it will be for the better..hang in there. miriam coronado |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, vphantom! Denise |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
This was a wonderful, and heartfelt piece. I wish on stars a lot, and wishes don't always come true, but its the thought that truly counts. HOpe your wish comes true. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
Welcome to Passions! I think you'll find we're all dreamers here - you will fit right in. This is really beautiful and sweet. I look forward to your others. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The stars know vphantom. . . and your wish will come true. . . you only have to believe it my friend. . . Wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vphantom Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 23 |
thank you my fiends, it is nice to know that you can empathize with the way I feel. Vphantom --The face is the mirror of the mind and the eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-- St. Jerome |
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BrazilianGirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29 |
hells Ya!!! Sometimes the stars just seem not be willing to make our dreams come true. ANYWAYS... I loved your poem!!!! |
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