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Twinkle, Twinkle

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vphantom
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0 posted 05-16-2000 03:07 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

Twinkle, twinkle
Star in the sky
How many more wishes
Will you deny?

I wished upon your twinkle
For many long years
And yet you grant me nothing
Except heart broken tears.

You say you forgot
Well let me remind you
It all started one night
At about one or two

I wished to find my soulmate
One for me alone
One tha's kind and gentle
Not with a heart of stone.

I want her to be loving
And with an angel's grace
I want her to show compassion
With every touch and embrace

What I ask is fairly simple
And I shall wish for nothing more
Just for her to be beside me
So I can love and adore

Twinkling star in the sky
A loving soulmate is all I miss
So now I send you
My dearest wish:

            Star light...Star bright...
                    
                            Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the eyes
  confess the secrets of the heart.-- St. Jerome



 
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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 05-16-2000 06:37 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I hope the stars are listening for you, and that your wishes come true VPhantom ... lovely poetic request!

Best wishes,
/Kit
sonjes
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2 posted 05-16-2000 06:46 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Ah...soul mates...do they exist?  Are they under our noses and we are so busy searching that we don't see them?  I really felt your poem, in every word and thought.  Keep your soul alive in your journeys.

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma
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3 posted 05-16-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

VPhantom~
I've been a 'star wisher' for many years ...
I like to think that the wishes find there way to another's heart.
Of course I've had a few that got lost in the time-warp ... but I just wish again.

I enjoyed your thoughts.
Hope your 'star' has a brand new twinkle.
~*Marge*~


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Dark Angel
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4 posted 05-16-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is wonderful vphantom   well done!

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


miriam
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5 posted 05-16-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

i can't express how much i liked this poem.  I was a star wisher too and mines never came true so i gave up.  YOu'll have a turn in life soon..and it will be for the better..hang in there.

  miriam coronado


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6 posted 05-16-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, vphantom!  

Denise
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7 posted 05-16-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

This was a wonderful, and heartfelt piece.  I wish on stars a lot, and wishes don't always come true, but its the thought that truly counts.  HOpe your wish comes true.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
lorilockheart
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8 posted 05-16-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Welcome to Passions!  I think you'll find we're all dreamers here - you will fit right in.  This is really beautiful and sweet.  I look forward to your others.

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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9 posted 05-17-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

The stars know vphantom. . . and your wish will come true. . . you only have to believe it my friend. . .

Wonderful poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

vphantom
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10 posted 05-19-2000 04:29 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

thank you my fiends, it is nice to know that you can empathize with the way I feel.  
                             Vphantom

--The face is the mirror of the mind and the
   eyes confess the secrets of the heart.--
                               St. Jerome
BrazilianGirl
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11 posted 05-19-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for BrazilianGirl   Email BrazilianGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrazilianGirl

hells Ya!!! Sometimes the stars just seem not be willing to make our dreams come true.
ANYWAYS... I loved your poem!!!!
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