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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia

0 posted 2000-05-16 01:38 AM


A smile

a glance

a touch

a sigh
      simple things
       yet so very important
      for these all form steel bonds to one another
            they strengthen things unspoken
                  and solidify 3 spoken words
                        I LOVE YOU
           with out these precious things
           bonds crumble and weaken
    tiny cracks become impassable canyons
so each day give these freely and often

a smile  \" "/

<<<<>>>

sssssssiiiiiiiiiggggghhhhhh


love you I do.......



[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 05-16-2000).]

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
1 posted 2000-05-16 03:01 PM


WEll said, a fantastic thought.


           "with out these precious things
           bonds crumble and weaken
    tiny cracks become impassable canyons"

I especially love this image.



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2000-05-16 03:53 PM


Beautiful!  

Denise

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
3 posted 2000-05-16 04:10 PM


yes beautiful
lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
4 posted 2000-05-16 06:58 PM


How true, how true.  Short, sweet, and right on the mark.

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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