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A Chance To Dance
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A Chance To Dance |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
His opportuned appearance caught my eye The sight quite tempting I can see why To approach him undecided of what to do An action unsure if I should pursue The attraction that seems quite mutual To sieze the moment is not to crucial A thought to ponder what are my chances To mingle in his love of sweet dances Only when the time is right The wick of my candle he will light 53 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyWeb~ What a pretty piece. And this lovely phrase to start the day .... 'To mingle in his love of sweet dances' Ahhhhhh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
So many images flashed through my mind in reading this one. I definitely like.  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely and romantic sentiments LadyWeb ... I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lady Web, this is a lovely piece, I have to agree with Marge...... To mingle in his love of sweet dances ahhhhhhhh! Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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