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CSwtThng
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0 posted 05-15-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CSwtThng

Sometimes

Sometimes I think I love you
Sometimes I'm not sure
Sometimes you're the illness
And sometimes you're the cure

Sometimes I want to cry
Sometimes I want to smile
Sometimes I want to stay
But just for a little while

Sometimes I think too much
Sometimes I don't think at all
But either way I end up
With my back against the wall

Someday I'll figure it out
But for now I'm just confused
I can't understand why
My heart feels so abused

Sometimes I get carried away
But I keep my feet on the ground
Sometimes I don't know I'm lost
Until I've already been found

Sometimes I believe you
When you say it's meant to be
Sometimes I keep my eyes closed
And ponder some silent mystery

Somehow I can feel you
With each soft, gentle breeze
Thoughts of us together
Put my mind at ease

I remember our happy times
Through each and every season
It's now I know I love you
I remember every reason


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1 posted 05-15-2000 09:40 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, CSwtThng!

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2 posted 05-15-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

This is truly a beautiful poem.
CSwtThng
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3 posted 05-15-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for CSwtThng   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CSwtThng

Thanks Denise! Your opinion means a lot to me.
Thanks Insect! I'm glad you liked it.
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4 posted 05-15-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SweetThing~
This is exquisitely touching.

'I remember our happy times
Through each and every season
It's now I know I love you
I remember every reason'

What wonderful thoughts of your remembering.
~*Marge*~




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5 posted 05-16-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

Absolutely a beautiful poem.  I feel exactly the same way.

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6 posted 05-16-2000 02:34 AM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

This poem echoes my own feellings lately whenever my ex and I talk about reconciling.We truly love each other, I miss him a lot. I didn't choose the divorce, but since it happened things have changed for me a lot. I want to be with him but then I don't know if it is HIM or just being lonely...don't know if I want to go back...instead of forward. All very confusing and your poem says it very well. Thanks for sharing.
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