Sy My poor little brain cells can't always reach the depths of your thoughts. This has a sad tone to it. I enjoy seeing you experimenting with various rhyme schemes. I don't know that I could handle this one, though. You seem to do it with ease Liz
Member Rara Avis
I was here and read it. I hate to say it passed me over too, but it did. It does sound sad, but you have a fantastic flow to it all. I've read it a few times now, and am not really grasping the full meaning, sorry.
did some one wake up in the wrong side of the bed today??? (just kiding) hoping to make you *smile* dark and brooding poem Sy-guy... but deep and thought provoking as well... loved the last lines. take care, jm