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More than I love myself
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More than I love myself |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, 
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I know that you love me, More than i love myself, That you gave this ring to me, Leaving behind everything else. I know how hard it is, To tell me that its changed, That everything i'm grasping for, Is out of reach agian. Today was the brightest day, Becuase I made believe, That you could actually understand, All that you feel for me. That it wouldnt overwhelm you, And scare you deep inside, Force emotions deep inside you, That I never though you'de hide. How can I blame you, In the end I made it this way, I let my dreams cloud my mind, Forgetting painful yesterdays. I let you pretend with me, That you were ready for this, Knowing that your scared, Feeling it even in your kiss. But I know that you love me, More than I'll ever love myself, So I'll stand by you just long enough, To feel what you have felt. |
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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
Amber- This is a very well written, heartfelt poem! It's an excellent write, and very it's very emotional aswell, keep writing! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well written! Hope it all works out  <*\\\>< Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is beautifully expressed. I especially love the last line: "to feel what you have felt." Too little too late, huh? It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
The poem is beautiful sis, but you should always love yourself for the special person you are!! I love you dearly, and I know that he does too...just have patience with him and you KNOW you'll be walking down that aisle soon enough!!!  (I'll be the one catching the bouquet I hope...he he) So smile gorgeous...it will be ok...cuz I said so!! (and I won't even call you hun this time!! lolOpen arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
thanks so much, there always seems to be understanding here. thanks sis i love you! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well Amber nice to see, If I read you corectly... you need to let the past slip from thee. Yesterday can never find today unless it's reeled in again to haunt our ways. Each day is ever new don't bring a past back into view. A line that you once wrote speaks a very deep meaning to me, "I'd tell you, I Love You, but you'd probably break my heart" words so deep that another can see that there's some part of you that's searching through your past. Give today a chance, don't wake up tomarrow and find ten years has gone by and away and you hadn't had enough time to say..? As always Amber your right from the heart, Bless Bless... Dale If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful and heart-felt emotions flow from you pen Amber ... this was very moving ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amber~ OK, Hun, I agree with Sis on this ... give it time and let the love continue to grow. The wonderful things in life are worth being patient for. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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